You know, one shot of the lightrays would have been enough to establish that feature, because it is not technically your work.
But not to come off like a downer: Your outdoor levels look actually rather good so far, much better than the interior which is, quite honest...lame.
If I where you, I would focus more on outdoor levels because you appear to have a thing for them.
You can improve your indoor levels by actually adding something other thant boxes and plain white light to them. They look surreal and don't seem like a building any san architect would come up with.
You should also add a few more details, because right now, your levels look totally unfinished. In some shots, the stock segments look misplaced.
Especially in this one ..
And please...add some different boxes.
That being said, this could be something nice when its done
Oh! One more thing:
Quote: "PLEASE NOTICE that this level is still very much WORK IN PROGRESS and is not a final version"
That is a little bit like these "baby on board" bumper stickers for cars. People are not going to drive saver because you posted a sign and people are also not going to quit pointing flaws out if you state that its a work in progress. We know that, because this is the work in progress board.
If you want to get as much feedback as possible: Don't type that, because a lot of users might think that you don't want any criticism if you post sentences like this. That might seem odd to you, but we actually had some dimwits around here that only wanted nice comments in their threads. (for whatever reason).
Oh, and while I'm adding
this might give you and idea for a more interesting ceiling
Edit: I totally sound like a dick in this post... don't mean to sound stuck up, I really just want to provide feedback.
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