Jhon,
Greetings. Model Pack #4 certainly is a good addition. Good choice for the purchase.
Your screenies are...well...
boring and
tedious to the eye. The lighting is poor, and the composition of the scenes is weak.
Without a title, or storyline for your project, it's nearly impossible for the viewer to get excited about seeing very average looking screenshots, that everyone on these boards has seen hundreds of times before. A picture is worth a thousand words, but your screenshots say nothing.
Keep practicing with compositions, and the use of lighting. Your screenshots and the game itself will improve, all in good time.
I look forward to watching the evolution of your project...whatever that might be. Pick a storyline and a name. The rest will fall into place...
Thanks,
Seth Black
"...I'm sorry, could you repeat your question a little louder? I'm a trifle deaf in this ear."
- Willie Wonka