Wraith Staff,
I'm going to be harsh, but do believe me, I'm trying to help.
This is not a good WIP. First of all, you've not been able to show any sign of progress. Second of all, your claims to get an ESRB rating and to be selling it in stores makes the post sound rather... dreamish. Especially since getting your game rated is a rather expensive thing to do with a game that uses models that aren't yours. The demo, for other people interested, is available
here.
Your post sounds more like the dreamers idea of a great game. My recommendation? Either update this post with easy-to-access video's, screenshots, demo's (I found the demo through your website) ect. and admit you're not likely to have the game rated (I wouldn't pay money to get this stuff rated) nor published/sold in stores unless locally... Actually, I wouldn't even make it commercial because I don't think many people will buy it. After playing the demo I had to conclude your level design is repeating, the enemies are simply programmed and honestly, there's nothing special about the game that makes it worth money. Look at what games are being sold in this community: Dumbo and Cool, a flawless, fun platformer... EvoChron, a spacesim with everything on it... In the future Dream, a extremely well presented puzzlegame. Do you feel your game matches the quality of those games?
You know, the best way to go is to keep practising and realistic. This game will never make profit for you, and that you'll rate it is plain nonsense. I recommend you to read
this post and adapt your next WIP thread to it.
Keep up and don't let this get you down. Everyone has to learn.
Rami
