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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / S3RIAL- (PGPS Winter Contest Entry)

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ASTECH
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Posted: 18th Oct 2007 23:05 Edited at: 22nd Oct 2007 22:55
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Hello community! I've been away for a while with
some home PC internet problems and now I'm back...
(at least barely) and I wanted to make this the
"Official" thread for my entry. The story is still
subject to change but I have been doing some extensive
work on planning and organizing.

The Story- UPDATED 10-22-07

You are Ryan McClain, Commando. You and several other squads were sent into Corpseville to liberate the town of any hostile forces.
The town once was headquarters to Falco Tech, a leading orginization in studies of the body and sicknesses. A special group was taking the task of finding a cure for cancer. They had thought they had found the true cure and they tested it on a subject. The subject was a little girl and she died after several long moments of pain and torment. With this death, a uprising broke out among the facility and this "Super-Cancer" was released to the public.It has been several weeks later and your squad is sent in to liberate what is left of the mutants and infiltrate the facility to find out what went down and how to stop it. The only problem is... you can't remember anything up until the point the van drops your team off. Only moments after you head into the building... the van explodes... killing everyone in your squad.
Your on your own now in the dead silence and yet you don't feel alone...

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"... I couldn't bear the act... as she lay there convulsing in pure agony... her gaze of hatred pierced my heart as if to ask 'Why daddy? Why betray me?"

"...I killed them all... yes... even him... but it was over... there was nothing else I could have done... you do understand Ryan... don't you?"

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ASTECH
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Posted: 18th Oct 2007 23:21
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I'm sure you've seen him in Cheese's model thread
and he was mainly created for my game. This guy
plays a big role in the game for certain reasons
I can't tell but just take a look.


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SamHH
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Posted: 18th Oct 2007 23:36
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Looking good!


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Pain
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wow love ur guy that cheese cake got u
looking good and gl

pain

Me = noob

and i love The TGC : )
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Troy Chambers
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sounds great, but does this game have something to do with serial killers, 'cause the name S3RIAL, just screams serial killers to me.
Anyway, keep it up, can't wait for more.

"You say goodbye, I say HALO."
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Defy
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@Astek, No good about the home net setup. Mine went down for 4-5 days a few months back .
Anyway, Game looking good, And good luck in the comp.

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protoborg
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Interesting story, Astek. I love your avatar. The guy beat his computer 'till HE is dead is hilarious. It's a little long, but funny enough to not matter.

You know your code sucks when it does what you want before you know what you want.
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ASTECH
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Posted: 22nd Oct 2007 22:48
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Well my internet went down again and well I can't post screens on this computer right now but I do have an update.

It doesn't really center around a prison but a very vague storyline.

You are Ryan McClain, Commando. You and several other squads were sent into Corpseville to liberate the town of any hostile forces.
The town once was headquarters to Falco Tech, a leading orginization in studies of the body and sicknesses. A special group was taking the task of finding a cure for cancer. They had thought they had found the true cure and they tested it on a subject. The subject was a little girl and she died after several long moments of pain and torment. With this death, a uprising broke out among the facility and this "Super-Cancer" was released to the public.It has been several weeks later and your squad is sent in to liberate what is left of the mutants and infiltrate the facility to find out what went down and how to stop it. The only problem is... you can't remember anything up until the point the van drops your team off. Only moments after you head into the building... the van explodes... killing everyone in your squad.
Your on your own now in the dead silence and yet you don't feel alone...


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ASTECH
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Exerts-

"... I couldn't bear the act... as she lay there convulsing in pure agony... her gaze of hatred pierced my heart as if to ask 'Why daddy? Why betray me?"

"...I killed them all... yes... even him... but it was over... there was nothing else I could have done... you do understand Ryan... don't you?"


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Deathead
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Quote: "Corpseville "

Its a tad obvious of a name. What about Clanksville. Or something like that. Not Corpseville gives it away too much.

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ASTECH
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Corpseville is a real place. Search it on google. "Legend of Corpseville." Although it has nothing to do with the real town. I was just pointing that out.


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