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Keo C
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Posted: 13th Dec 2007 04:03 Edited at: 13th Dec 2007 04:20
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James A. | 21:05 | Base Camp
Quote: "Brad have enough time to get out of the blast radius before they detonate?"
He has 10 sec. after the handle leaves the grenade. As for the explosion itself, ask around for some Willie Pete grenades. The stuff in there burns at 2700C.


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[i]I forgot to mention that Arnold's main skill is with engines, if that helps in any plans [/b]

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"OK but I go with Tom, I left him behind once and I'm dammed if I'm going to do the same thing again."
Every spare moment since his escape Arnold had thought of the other prisoners, those he had escaped with that were MIA in the jungle somewhere, and those he had left behind. The chance arrival of Tom had lifted some of the burden from his mind, the two had barely spoken before but Arnold admired Tom's tough reserve in front of the Chinese. Now the too were free, Arnold felt he was responsible for Tom's life, as though he was a symbol of the men Arnold had left behind.

"You can't go up the pipe Walter, it would be suicide! You're the only flyer we have."

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Walter | 21:06 | Base Camp
"Wish we had remote explosives - grenades is all we have - you could try to shoot the damn thing a few times first, I don't know. Arnold, We can't put you and Tom together, we need firepower at the raid. Although, you could do a reroute and go along with them to the truck first to make sure it works before coming to Alpha. We can't leave Jeff sniping unprotected, we need a third man in Alpha to check for the patrol and the back of the team."

Walter swallowed. The idea of the pipe was horrifying and if things went wrong, he'd be a goner. There was no other option.

"The pipe is necessary. We need to have a man on the inside, to create further confusion and take out hard targets, Arnold - if you guys create enough chaos, it should work out."


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James A. | 21:07 | Base Camp
"Walter. On my daily work around the woods I found this in an abandoned foxhole." Presents Walter with a Tri-fold shovel. "Maybe you could use it."


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Walter | 21:08 | Base Camp
"Thanks, James". Walter took both the shovel and a long stare at the stars. "I'll go to bed. I'd better be awake tomorrow."


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James A. | 21:10 Dec.12 | Base Camp
James went to get more wood for the fire. After that he went to pack up for the mission tomorrow.


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Jeff Carmichael | 21:15 Dec 12 | Base Camp

"So am I the opening shot? The 'spark that lights the fuse'?"


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You don't need to put time and location if you are having a conversation with the last poster

Arnold
"The rebels are eager to know their role in our plan.
OK I will go to the truck and perform any minor repairs, what condition was it in when you found it?
That truck could be teaming with radiation but we must use it, it's the only thing we have that can break through the gates.
I will go and assess the truck in the morning and I suggest we strike tomorrow night."

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Posted: 13th Dec 2007 04:43 Edited at: 13th Dec 2007 04:44
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Quote: ""So am I the opening shot? The 'spark that lights the fuse'?""

James A. | 21:20 Dec.12 | Base Camp
"No. Alpha squad blows the jet. Beta will signal when the patrol leaves, then Delta and Gamma teams will start the raid. Jeff. will then shoot and keep all teams updated on the action. Arnold, maybe you can catch Walter before he fells asleep.


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Walter | 21:20 | Base Camp
Walter yawns, but this is important.

Walter takes a notepaper and writes down:
- Alpha triggers explosion.
- Beta waits for the patrol checking the airplane, wait a few moments till they're well gone, signal Gamma.
- Gamma attacks, Beta joins. Charlie uses sewer pipe.
- Alpha joins Beta. Charlie uses grenade in the guard house.
- Charlie releases prisoners. Joint assault.

"Whole thing should take no more than 15 minutes if we do it correctly."

He turns around in his bed and tries to fall asleep again.


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It is now December, 13. Day of the raid: Things start at 21:00PM GMT.


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Tom | 07:20 | Base Camp

Again Tom was the first to wake. He got up and got himself dressed. Today would be an important day if all went well, otherwise it would be a massacre. Either way, it was an attempt, and that was all that mattered.


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Brian | 08:00 Dec 13 | Base

Brian had been pacing laps around the camp for half an hour. He eventually decided to go check over his equipment one more time. This was the day. The biggest day of the rest of his life.


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Walter | 16:00 | Base Camp
Walter sat down against a tree just outside the camp, sun shining into his face brightly. He overthought the events that would take place in a few hours.


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Tom | 18:00 | Base Camp

Tom looked at his grenade and sat down. in just 3 hours time they would leave. He went off in search of Walter - he wanted to ask something.


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James A. | 18:00 | Base Camp
James hated the silence before a fight, it was eerie. He walked up to Walter. "Good luck."


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Jackie T. | 18:40 | Base Camp

Jackie walked over the place. In a few hours he might be killed. He looked down at his weapon and clutched it in place. He walked out of his tent and saw James and Walter. He walked over to them both. "Good luck men, we might need it."

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Walter | 20:00 | Base Camp
One hour till the raid would start. Walter once more reassured himself this was the only way. The airfield was two battles away.

If they ever got that far.


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Walter | 20:45 | Base Camp
"ROLL CALL!"


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Jackie | 20:45 | Base Camp

Gamma! Jackie!

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Tom | 20:46 | Base Camp

ALPHA! TOM!


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I think with about 30 minutes will start this. Anyone not here will be controlled by team members


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Beta! James!


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Walter | 21:00 | Outside Base Camp
Walter turned back to face the team. He smiled wryly for a second and shed off the fears of the upcoming battle.

"Well, men, good luck!"

He walked over to Tom:
"Tom, best of luck. Brian, keep him safe, will you?"
He pressed an additional grenade into Tom's hand.

Walter nodded at the Gamma team.

"And you guys, come along."

Walter and team Gamma set off in the direction of the river.


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i think tom may have to be controlled by someone else - at least for part of it. i may be able to do a bit at the beginning.


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James A. | 21:00 | Outside Base Camp
"Ok, Beta. Let's move out."


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Jackie | 21:04 | Outside Base camp |

Walter, Jackie and Brad walked along the slightly waterlogged forest. "Walter. What happens if theres a guard that spots one of us before we set off the explosion?" Jackie looked worriled at Walter whilst walking on.

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Walter | 21:05 | Near West River Bank
"We're screwed. I think we'd try and take them out, but if we cause hell to break out, I guess the explosion will confuse them enough. Let's just hope they don't. We'll keep a rest at the point where the river branches until 21:45. Beyond that, there should be patrols according to the rebels."


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Tom | 21:07 | On the move
"Brian," said Tom "good luck - we'll need it."
They headed for the Truck.


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Jackie | 21:05 | Near West River Bank

"Okay. the explosion will confuse them, then i can use my amazing sharpshooting skills, to cover you." Brad and Walter looked at Jackie. "Sorry, just trying to add a bit of humour to this situation"


Tha_Rami or someone else might have to take over me later because i have to go sleep.

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Walter | 21:12 | West River
"Okay, here. I got this rope, I'll swim across. The currents don't seem too harsh at this point. You keep this end of the rope in case the currents turn out harder than I think."

Walter wades into the river, feeling the ground sink away below him more and more. The river was probably a few meters deep, and he started to swim across the river, trying to stay as close to rocks as he could. If a current overtook him and he wasn't crushed against the rock - which was most unlikely - he could clamp on to the rock. He wondered how the other team were doing as he reached half of the river.

Is okay, Father Tree. Anyone from Team Gamma can take you over and otherwise I will . If theres noone, we can just extend this to tomorrow and make up for the loss of sync with dates by adding in a restday in the story .


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Jackie | 21:13 | West river

"Dont worry, i got all my weight on this baby!" Jackie clamped on the tree whilst walter waded across the river. The tree was slippery but he grasped onto a branch and got his balance. "Walter you heavy man!" Jackie laughed and kept his grasp.

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Walter | 21:15 | Across West River
Walter laughed as he waded onto the other side of the river.
"Sorry! Didn't sport enough to lose it, after the bang!"
He knotted the rope around a nearby branch and gave the okay sign for Jackie and Brad to come over.


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tha_rami, can we take you up on your restday idea? i and i think lots of others have to go to sleep soon - maybe pick it up again slightly earlier tomorrow? either way - i gotta go now.


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Jackie | 21:15 | Rope to Other Side of West River

"Okay im coming over" Jackie started to slowly walk along the thick piece of rope. He normally could keep his balance and that kept him happy walking along the rope. Suddenly he slipped. "Ah bollocks!" Jackie slipped along the river and fell in the deep water. He grabbed the rope before he slipped down the river. "Phew that was close!" He laughed as he waded across the water. "God im all wet now!" He said to walter and brad as he got across.

[i]Right i gotta go now, if you keep going without me i dont mind, but if you wait then ill be back about 3:25 cus i got school haha.

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James A. | 21:45 | Near North Bridge
Closing in on the north bridge, ETA 5 minutes.


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Walter | 21:45 | River Branch Point
Walter, Brad and Jackie had been chatting for the last 20 minutes now, Walter clothes had been drying rapidly. He felt a lot more comfortable sneaking into an armed base without the sopping sounds, he had joked. They had been joking a lot in any case, the atmosphere was light-hearted. Walter took a look on his watch, nodded, stood up and said: "Well guys, time to go".

Can I present the possibility to put this on hold till tomorrow evening (Friday?) - we should be able to get more people when it's not a schoolday the day after. Everyone can position himself on a point at 21:45 and write his/her story up till that point.


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Quote: "Can I present the possibility to put this on hold till tomorrow evening (Friday?) - we should be able to get more people when it's not a schoolday the day after. Everyone can position himself on a point at 21:45 and write his/her story up till that point."

I'd rather not, but it's fine to me if we do. In fact I'd rather have a rest day.


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Yes, there is kind of a problem with time zones. You guys have to go to bed, and I just got home from school! Maybe we could extend important events like fights, let them pass slower so more people can respond

Brian | 21:00 Dec 13 | Moving

"Brian! Alpha!" Brian yelled.

After listening to Walter's last minute pep-talk, Brian and Tom were on the move. "Good luck to you too, Tom."

After a short walk they spotted the truck ahead. Brian continued forward in a cautious crouch. He never could get the hang of the silent atmosphere just before battle. However, he reached the truck without incident.

Brian carefully and quickly checked the ground around the truck, but saw no signs of human activity. He proceeded hoist himself into the driver's seat of the truck. A few seconds later, he collected himself enough to turn the key.

"Click!"

He cursed. The engine hadn't started. He tried once more, and this time it rattled to life with a roar, but then subsided to a low putter. "Ok, Tom. I'm going to leave it idling so we can get out of here fast. Let's find that plane!"


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Tom | 21:00 | at the plane

great! Tom thought. He and Brian raised their explosives...
Brian would give the signal - He waited for Brian to give the word.


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Blobby, wouldn't that be 22:00?

Walter | 21:58 | Near Mercenary Camp West River
"Okay, well... Jackie, Brad - good luck".

It was hard talking, having shuffled through the grass. He was exhausted, but they had not been seen. Walter realized there was no time for heroic speeches, and crawled on. He had to reach the sewer pipe unseen.


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Arnold | 08:32 | Truck Site
Arnold and James made their way through the thick forest towards the abandoned truck. The rain had been heavy the night before and Arnold feared the engine would be totally flooded.
His fears where realised when they tried to start the engine, it spluttered but wouldn't fire.
Arnold set to work draining the engine, the mixture of oil and water seemed to endlessly spew from the underside of the truck.
James checked the battery and luckily it still had some power in it.
They waited several hours for the engine to dry out before putting the small amount of oil that was available to them into the engine, "I hope this is enough to stop the thing seizing up or we'll have to give up on it all together"
Arnold turned the key, the engine spluttered but still didn't ignite. He tried again and after some time it kicked into life.
Arnold felt a rush of relief that returned the blood to his face, this was one sturdy old truck.
The two men returned to base leaving the truck behind, there was so little fuel left they couldn't risk a needless journey.

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Hold on, I though Alpha squad was supposed to start the truck (that's us, we already did it above). And even if it wasn't us, I'm sure it was supposed to be at 21:00. Pay attention to the briefing! Or maybe you were just getting it ready for us?

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"Here's my grenade, I'm supposed to cover you. There may or may not be some heavily armed mercenaries around here," Brian reminded Tom. "How good are you at throwing? You should be close enough at about 6 meters(25 feet)."

Brian drew his rifle and waited for Tom to throw.


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Jackie | 21:59 | Near Mercenary Camp West River

"Good luck walter." Jackie smiled at walter and then started to crawl to a vantage point, where he could see the guards. There were quite a few of them. Tall dark haired blokes with pistols and light machine guns. Jackie looked at brad, then looked back at the guards waiting for Betas signal to attack.

"This is it..." Jackie thought.

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Tom | 22:00 | crashed aeroplane

He threw the grenade and ran. Brian followed. They dived and the plane exploded behind them. "Do you think the others heard that?" Tom joked.


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Walter | 22:00 | Sewer Pipe
Walter was certain that the earth below his feet shook as a column of fire shot up into the skies. It was the last daylight he saw, as he sprinted into the sewer, quickly throwing back a look at the Gamma team. Jackie and Brad were ready. He was underway.

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Jeff Carmichael | 22:00 | Forest Surrounding Enemy Encampment
Jeff put his ghillie suit on and took up position in a tree surrounded and partially obscured by thick brush about 300 yards away from the enemy encampment. He perched himself on a branch, mounting his sniper rifle on an adjacent one. After he was situated, he peered through his scope, observing enemy movements in the camp. They seemed to be wary and alarms were sounding as they frantically grabbed their weapons and took defensive positions as a result of the explosion. According to plan, he radioed to Gamma, "I'm in position, ready when you are," and waited silently, his sniper crosshair centered on an enemies head, his finger poised against the trigger.


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Jackie |22:01|Outside Enemy Encampment|

"Sure Jeff." Jackie got up and started firing at the enemy. He got one right in the head, he fell to the ground seamlessly with the pieces of debris in the ground. The enemy looked around, they couldnt see Jackie and Brad, "Hah, what a foolish ****." He laughed and started shooting the guards taht poured out of the doors. "Brad,Lets start going to meet up with walter. But keep low they havent spotted us two yet." Jackie couched down and started to walk through the bushes and into the base.

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Jeff Carmichael | 22:00 | Forest Surrounding Enemy Encampment
As soon as Jackie started firing, Jeff fired, instantly taking out his target. He moved on to the next, and began picking them off from behind cover, and they remained clueless as to his position. "One...two...three..." he counted to himself as he took them each out. He thought nothing of it, they were not human to him, only targets to be eliminated. There was no explosion in the guardhouse yet, and he waited anxiously, hoping that Walter had succeeded in his mission.


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Jackie |22:01|Inside Enemy Encampment|

Jackie and Brad snuck in the Enemy Encampment, "Hah we made it, now..time to get to work." Looking around they saw a sign pointing to the prison blocks, Jackie ran around the corner stabbing the unaware guard in the back before he could see him. "Here!" They saw the prison blocks inside, they walked in, all around them, he saw Walter by the controls. "Hey Walter!!" Jackie ran around to Walter..

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