Quote: "OMG thank you so much Shadow Blade! I’ve been looking every where for those kinds of models! I’m so glad you told me about those.
I see what your saying about the story line. In my head I know the story line full out. But for a player, it might be confusing. So i thank you so much for your help. That saved me a lot a grief from players. So thanks a bunch again! Is there anything your confused about that i could add to the story line description? So that every one that reads it is fully satisfied.
Ill be sure to put your name in the game for your help! Thanks again Shadow Blade!"
No problem mate, I can't wait for this to be finished, I'll BETA test if you want...
About the story you need something that sounds good, as in it grabs your player's attection write it like a very, very short book something like a blurb...
(Here is yours) When Xavi was a little kid, the evil Redrias storm his home town and killed every one a every thing. Due to the hate towards the Redrias, Xavi seeks a combat trainer and trains for10 years to try and get back at the Redrias.
(Mine (feel free to use this one)) In the land of [insert land name here] the most feared warrior of all the land, Redrias accompanied by his mercenaries roamed pillaging villages and taking their gold and valuables for his own greedy needs. One day he came the town of [insert town name here] home to young peaceful child named Xavi he lived with his mother and father, he had many friends in the village.
Redrias stormed each house taking all the money and valuables then burned the house to the ground. When he came to Xavi’s house his father drew a sword and tried to fight him off, he fought bravely but was not trained so was quickly killed. Crying Xavi ran as fast he could into the forest near the village as he heard the cries of his mother as she was slaughtered, he escaped but only just.
Later he came back to the ruins of his Home town, there was nothing left, everyone was dead, and he was the only survivor. He searched the ruins for his father’s body then buried it; over his grave he swore an oath, to become the best fighter in the land, to hunt Redrais and not stop until he was lying in a pool of his own blood.
Xavi found a trainer, he trained hard for 10 years, he become one of the worlds finest swordsmen, now he decided it was time to hunt and kill Redrias, he asked around in inns about the location of Redrias but didn’t find much, however Redrias heard of Xavi and went into hiding, so now Xavi must find as much as he can about the location of Redrias before being able to kill him, so this is where his quest begins…
Hope you like it, I spent quite a while on it, you can use it if you like, what I was saying is you should use more detail like this, obviously you need to change the [insert name here] bits but after that I think it’s a pretty good story. If you want to use it you don’t have to give credit but it would be nice (
Hope you found that useful, and let me know if you want me to BETA test. Looking forward to seeing more screens.
EDIT
I only just saw the post saying about the prolouge thing, I guess now my story is a tad useless, anyway you can use it if you want, I could do it on a scroll as well if want me to...
-Shadow Blade
