Your screens shots look nice.
Quote: "Feedback and suggestions welcomed. "
Are questions welcomed? (I hope so because I have another one)
If you don't mind me asking; How much did your ESRB Rating Cost? (I hope you didn't just copy/paste their rating logo)
Quote: "Wouldn't there be moral issues with killing your own race"
Yeah, that's too realistic (historical armies did and modern armies do) and this is supposed to be sci-fi.
Quote: "By the looks of the first image you are planning to make a boxed product? If so, I hope you have $1000 ready"
He can make $5,000 first before the FPSC X10 license is even due, so he doesn't need that money up front.
Quote: "Any [c]omments or feed back welcomed."
You need a little more work on
your English too. (your is the possessive form of you)
"takes control of you body" should read "takes control of your body"
"you job will be to" should read "your job will be to"
MY body
MY job
If I can call it mine, then you can call it yours.