Wow, I must say that you're the first person I've seen to use my cutters in a game, thanks lol.....
Screens look pretty good, I take it your going for a sci-fi/WWII look? I think the story could use a little work, perhaps try it from the point of view of the character, e.g:
Quote: "Just another day at the HQ, Johnson eating his way through a small mountain of donuts, while I just sit here and wait for smething to happen. I suppose thats what I get for becoming a police investigator when people just use the normal police guys. Well, that's life....
Here in this dark, cold place. Where the man told us to go. THat man, his deformed, blood stained form haunts me, I must find out what happened to him, or who happened to him...
Just another day at the office, I guess that'll change soon..."