I dont want to be rude, but You arent showing us much, if it is a horror game, it isnt everything like dark, ansd such, a horror game is all about the Sound (cant see that in the pic can I?), the game design, the trigger placement, light placement, ambience level, and so on,
Most Important The Story: For most of the people that is the most important. I think
Quote: "What´s That in the back?"
2 Cylinder, with a texture aplied, + Normal Map or Shader, Relief Mapping And a Women or Man (pretty nice actually)
But it is ok, keep things in mind,
For A Perfect Level I need a whole Week ,.. Maybe more, soo (Including all gadjets suchas sounds, radio and so on)
Sometimes I see a Thread of a "game" that someone made a level, and then I see a post, "wait I am finishing my second level and almost started my third one, but as i made the fourth first, I am very close to the finished" But that isnt gonna work isn´t it?
BUT I AM SURE, If you make a couple of changes it comes out COMPLETE AWESOM; THE MODEL AND SHader or Nomal Mapiing use, is nice, Just show us more candy so we can drug ourself With your amazing screenshots
EDITED: Nice Title Bytheway
Hope it helped
Bye