Mr Drew. I must admit, in my opinion, Milk Paton's sound mixing has always been a bit rough around the edges. The musical and voice elements are normally good, but there is always a problem with bloody hard to understand Glaswegian accents becoming too quiet to properly make out (the sub titles are the thing that saves it here). Also, I think there is normally an opportunity to add in a few more sound effects, to fill in for the artistic visual style.
My suggestions without even watching the new vid would be:
- More sound effects
- Improve the quality of the voice recordings (I can't remember if the newer vids have improved quality). But garbage in = garbage out. So a good quality recording is the best place to start.
- You need some dynamics work, to smooth out high volume and low volume peaks/troughs, so it's always easy to hear quiet bits and loud bits don't blow up your speakers.
You're right to pay more attention to the audio. When your style is sometimes partially animated in a mental way frozen frame movies, the sound scape should play a critical role in helping it flow.
I am REALLY busy at the moment, so I can't offer help (at least, not for the next 3 or 4 weeks), but would happily watch and provide targeted feedback.
Peace to Paton.