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Geek Culture / [LOCKED] Egyptian Buzzsaw

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iron programmer
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Posted: 10th Apr 2009 00:38 Edited at: 10th Apr 2009 01:25
I need someone to review my work here...

Please rate on a scale of one to ten, ten best.

Please give reasons for rating and constructive critism.

mi keety tot mi gramer?

(My kitty taught me grammer.)

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Seppuku Arts
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Posted: 10th Apr 2009 01:08
Quote: "Please rape on a scale of one to ten, ten best. "



Ummm... Sorry, I'm not a rapist.

Dr Tank
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Posted: 10th Apr 2009 01:10
My rape goes all the way up to 11.
iron programmer
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Posted: 10th Apr 2009 01:25
Oh.

My bad. Let me change that.

Can someone please RATE this.

mi keety tot mi gramer?

(My kitty taught me grammer.)
Virtual Nomad
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Posted: 10th Apr 2009 01:34 Edited at: 10th Apr 2009 01:37
sorry but that's just a bunch of noise, to me. it's completely random, without any semblance of structure, and without reason (that i could make out). ie, what's the point? what is the listener supposed to get out of it, beside a headache?

it sounded like someone tossed a few electric guitars onto the sand in front of an enraged herd of 1000 drunk camels who happened to stop for a few minutes and tap dance on top while a bongo player kicked his instrument down a towering flight of steps.

again, sorry. i "just didn't get it" for the reasons mentioned. on a scale of 1 to 10, it's a strong 0.

iron programmer
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Posted: 10th Apr 2009 01:45
Ok. Thanks. I'd rather a zero than no one rate it.

mi keety tot mi gramer?

(My kitty taught me grammer.)
Venge
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Posted: 10th Apr 2009 05:23
I can sort of make out what you were going for, but it didn't happen. Parts of it reminded me of some of the more ethereal Muse songs, but the repetitive drum beat and general over-synthesized guitar really killed it. 1/10.

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Jeku
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Posted: 10th Apr 2009 08:43
Keep these in the proper forums, please. We have a music forum for a reason.

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