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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Abandoned City (X9)

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Omegamer
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Posted: 11th May 2009 18:29
I startet my new Horrorgame Project.
Here are some Screenies:


How do you think about it??
Are these first pics o.k???
visual dreamer
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Posted: 11th May 2009 22:23
the last pic is very creepy mate,but do have a story to?
Juzi
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Posted: 11th May 2009 22:25
Yeah the sceenshots look good but I'm also interested to hear the story.

Coach Shogun 20
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Posted: 11th May 2009 22:56
Nice, the only story to fit this would have to be really good. So if its bad, expect to hear from my lawyer , jk

Braden 713
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Posted: 12th May 2009 09:53
Screenshots look really cool man! Very creepy, hope to see more soon
Kravenwolf
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Posted: 12th May 2009 11:57 Edited at: 12th May 2009 11:58
Wow O_o

Success is not final--failure is not eternal.
Omegamer
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Posted: 12th May 2009 16:16
The Story:

You are a special-agent of the "Alpha Force" and your teammembers
called you to that old and forgotten village Blacksville.
But on the way you have an accident and your cars crashed into a wall.And you can´t find your teammembers.There is only blood.
On the search for help,you see some things, from there you thought that they are only at hell!!!

(I know the story isn´t really good,but I hope my game is much better then it!!!)
Braden 713
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Posted: 12th May 2009 22:14
A story is a story, it's not bad man

And even where your story may lack a little, the screens you've given us surely bring it justice! Can't wait to see more.
Coach Shogun 20
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Posted: 12th May 2009 22:52
The story is okay. It could use some improvement, but after that's better then some commercial game's story. I can't wait to see more screens.

Omegamer
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Posted: 13th May 2009 15:30
Thanx for your nice comments!!!
Metal Devil123
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Posted: 13th May 2009 17:18
I like the story. I think that some games are ruined with too complex story. So, yes story needs little improvements, but still, keep it simple.

Metaldevil123
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Posted: 16th May 2009 13:16
Here is a new pic(without fog)

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