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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Darimc's Ultimate FPSC Contest Entry [X9]

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darimc
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Posted: 6th Jun 2009 18:33 Edited at: 11th Jun 2009 04:01
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Well, Shattered is most definitely not dead. I will be reworking a lot of it though, I have not been happy with my level design. This is more of a test to see if I can make nice, believable levels.

The story is pretty basic, you are high up in an illegal drugalcohol business and the cops are now after you. I know it may not be as creative as some of my other games, but the storyline has more to it, and will be shown throughout the game. It will hopefully be 3-4 levels long.




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djmaster
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Posted: 6th Jun 2009 18:52
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Looks nice,very cityish look.

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darimc
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Posted: 6th Jun 2009 19:04 Edited at: 6th Jun 2009 19:05
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Thanks, here is a little banner thing.

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SekoIdiootti
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Posted: 6th Jun 2009 20:09
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Looks really cool this far.

My blood pack will have 500 blood overlays some day! I hope...
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Posted: 6th Jun 2009 21:57
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I must say, that last screen looks beautiful...

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A few things I noticed, why are pipes randomnly sticking out of the wall? Also, the vent on the right wall in the last screen looks very out of place.

Other than those, it looks very good.
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darimc
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Posted: 7th Jun 2009 01:45
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Thanks everyone.

Quote: "A few things I noticed, why are pipes randomnly sticking out of the wall? Also, the vent on the right wall in the last screen looks very out of place."
Pipes are part of the ventilation system. I will fix it up so it doesn't look so out-of-place.

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Ekipshi
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This looks sweet! one question where did u get those ceiling windows? I want em Over all good design for the room!

@Bendak, how does the vent look out of place? I mean maybe a little..

Maybe Darimc you could put the vent right at floor level, that's how you'll generally see vents in an apartment/highrise

Yeah... got hurt when i tripped... on some bullets
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Red Eye
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Quote: "A few things I noticed, why are pipes randomnly sticking out of the wall? Also, the vent on the right wall in the last screen looks very out of place."


Actually it looks very nice in the way it is.

Keep it up.


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darimc
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Posted: 7th Jun 2009 17:08
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Thanks guys, I have made a few minor adjustments. More screens soon.

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Posted: 7th Jun 2009 17:30 Edited at: 7th Jun 2009 17:31
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Some Nice Screens DarimC!

Some real Talent here. But, you should really retexture this closet with the WW2 stuff on it.

Best luck with your game and your further development



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darimc
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Posted: 7th Jun 2009 21:21
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Quote: "Some real Talent here. But, you should really retexture this closet with the WW2 stuff on it.
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Your right, I think I will do that. Thanks for the comment!

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darimc
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Posted: 10th Jun 2009 04:58 Edited at: 10th Jun 2009 04:59
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Do your eye's deceive you? NO! It is true, I have rigged the stock Uzi to mp5 hands. Over-exaggeration? Yes. Here you go!


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Coach Shogun 20
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lol, why is it glowing.

You have some great screens going on here man, great work. This has a whole lot of potential.

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darimc
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Quote: "lol, why is it glowing.
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It's just to emphasize the gun .

Quote: "You have some great screens going on here man, great work. This has a whole lot of potential."
Thanks! I need to figure out a way to get it noticed like some of the other more popular games.

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lol, I haven't even announced mine (here). Although, that's a good thing because I'm still refining it. My favorite screen is the second one

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thought i dont like uzis in games, great work


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darimc
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Posted: 11th Jun 2009 04:00
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New screen shots! This shows the first outdoor part of the level.

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Like the first of the three the most

my taste in music isn't weird, its just so amazing your ears haven't quite adapted to it yet.
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I want those chainlink fences in the first thread sooo badly
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Go download Cosmic Prophet's country time pack then

It's got those plus other awesome stuff


All the best

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Dar13
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That's some good outdoor stuff Darimc. Can't wait to see more.

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