The screens look great, but your story isn't very good and it's riddled with spelling errors.
Here's a re-written version.
Addiction is an unusual thing. It can turn even the kindest of men into demons, driven by anger and aggression. There is a new drug circulating the streets, one so addictive the user will do anything to get their next hit - even murder. The increasingly widespread use of the drug is causing chaos and destruction in some of the most populated cities, including -THE CITY WHERE THE GAME IS SET-.
You are Detective -CHARACTER SURNAME-, head of the largest military and detective unit currently combatting the new drug. Your objective - to clear the streets of this devastating substance, and making sure it is wiped clean from the Earth.
You have left your office after receiving a telephone call from an unidentified person. He claimed there were junkies in the flat above his taking the dangerous substance. Knowing the deadly effects of the drug, you have your gun loaded and in hand. Ready to take on whatever crazy, drug induced thugs are inside.
Feel free to use it if you wish, just give me credit if you do
P.S CoZ, I didn't give you permission to use my entities in anything other than Demon Sun. I don't mind, but I would like my name to be mentioned somewhere
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