Well, what do you expect with a name like 'Jake Jensen'?
Well, it feels like the song is sacking* behind a bit at times.
I suppose it might do in some kind of abstract video game (that's what I imagine anyway). The sounds are decent, but a bit too trancy in my oppinion - it seems like you were going for a restricted '8-bit sound', but some of the sounds (especially the pad, but also the overdrivenly fattened lead) are just too detailed to make that soundscape. Also, what's up with the poorly sampled drums?
Maybe you should have tried something of a more analogue origin there as well, or at least turn up the cut-off filter on them.
On the theme, it is rather simple, but then I imagine it to some sort of "small children's game", wherein the music usually is like that, so it needn't be a bad thing.
Anyway, that's a nice ending chord you've got there
By the way, what happened to your avatar?
* Probably not a proper english term.
What I mean is that the tempo is lagging behind a bit at times, or at least I get that impresson. Might be because some sound fades in too slowly a well.
