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Anyway,if its your first game,congratiulations,its looks much better than my first game.You should rework the story to make a bit more sense and use normal spelling not SuM WeRId SpaeLiNG."
sorry abaot my spelling, I'm only 13 with a horrid Catholic-based education. I also have ADHD, so I have some trouble with things like remembering how to spell and especially story-writing.
So, now that I've taken my fish oil, the stuff that helped me replace my giant brick level with one that actually makes physical sense, I rewrote the story:
You are an unaffiliated person who comes across a dropped PDA containing data on a crazy yet powerful man's plan to make a lot of money. It'd be fine, except the plan involves killing off 1/5th of the population with a manufactured virus that is easily cured with a suspiciously expensive vaccine.
The first level involves getting assumed by some thugs as a spy and taken to their base. You escape by toying with a breaker box you didn't know was wired to some explosives, blowing the upper building up leaving you with an old tunnel that takes you to the ex-biotech labs (Level 4, screenshot).
So, you escape the place to come out to an FBI agent who calls in saying you're a terrorist trying to monger fear.
When the bad agent takes off and drops an old bank receipt showing his payoff by the very CEO trying to kill a lot of people.
Knowing that your blood-type is in the group of those that should be killed by the virus, you realize you must take matters into your own hands and find a way to stop the virus from being released.
Oh, btw, now that I'm on my meds again I watched Naruto and now realize it sucks horribly.
Can I change my name?
