Quote: "My name is unknow for me... i woke up in this room filled of a wet smell... im alone but sometimes i hear footsteps i appeared here with some holed gloves...if there is something out of this room im going to kill it...."
The way you present your story needs a little work, here let me give it a shot:
"My name has left me, disappeared into the twilight... I cannot remember when I last slept but I have woken up in small musky room, with these torn and battered gloves... I haven't seen another soul or creature, but I can sometimes hear them around me. It's driving me insane, I must find them and kill them, or die..."
I don't mean to sound like a jerk whose just bashing your writing, but most people choose to follow a game's progress off of the first few screens and the story. You're screens are alright, but they're rather small. Try linking them to larger versions, so we can get the full effect. Your story, on the other hand, is unique but vague. I suppose the point of it is that its revealed to the player as he/she plays through. Good luck with this one mate, it sounds interesting.
P.S. You're skills are really improving, keep it up. Also, feel free to use my version of your story.
