Hey everyone, as a little project (I was bored) I started writing a story which is influenced by my previous attempts at FPSC Games. For those of you who know of my previous (failed) projects, this is basically what each part references:
Consequential Heroism = References "Endangered City" (without public knowledge)
Illogical Explanations = References "CodeRack: Alteration"
Exiled Futility = References part of "CR 2: GW", mostly "CodeRack 3: Parallel Worlds"
Logicia: Well... "Logicia" (Not an FPSC Project)
Anyway, heres the copy of the newest version of the first part + 3 chapters of the second part.
This is basically the progress sheet:
Consequential Heroism - Complete
Illogical Explanations - In Progress
Exiled Futility - Pending
Logicia - Pending
Feedback would be appreciated, criticism would make me cry

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Endangered City. An Endangered Species