Rather nice.
Seems you'v already critted what we can
So whats your subject matter?
Im tied to space age right now though i have twisted it to what suits me ^_^"
I had to write it like this since, "i was bored and i dont know" dosnt work;
Dehumanisation through fear; personified into living suits in which we embeded our souls to live forever.
- fear of space, vasteness, alone. So Fear of fear itself causing life to be feared. Alot of fear eh?
Then taken further into realisation of inhumanity and rehabilitation of it.
Bleh hell of a title. Anyway your's is looking great and i cant wait to see it finished.
-Con