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3 Dimensional Chat / my first 3D model for fpsc

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Dark Evenger
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here i'm making a character for fpsc what i want to sell for something like 4 $ what you think about ?




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Eminent
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How many polys is that? For first model it looks very good.


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Dark Evenger
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i don't founs the poly count in fragmotion but i had this

vertex count : 1862
face count : 3398

and do you think i can sell it 3 or 4 $ in fps creator ?
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Master Man Of Justice
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Posted: 8th Oct 2010 07:16
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ambitious i see.

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Dark Evenger
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Posted: 8th Oct 2010 07:39 Edited at: 8th Oct 2010 07:40
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yes but finaly i think i don't sell it , caus i'm not to good for sel media with this bad quality so i think give it for free in the fpsc chat.

can you give some comment aubout the moddeling ect... ?

( i had finish the animation)
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Quik
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3k faces seems a bit much for what it is? mind posting a wireframe? why does it have so much detail on the vest? you could have put that onto the face/arms/legs/hands istead.
the facial texture isnt too great either, the military pattern is pretty "undetailed" and looks pretty booring.

And honestly, you should wait before selling stuff. Improve first


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Dark Evenger
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Posted: 8th Oct 2010 20:04
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i'm not good for face texturing if some one can post a tutorial it can be helpfull.

here the wireframe screen:



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The Zoq2
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Posted: 10th Oct 2010 00:51
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I think it looks nice, making humans is probably the hardest part od 3d modelling

Srry about my english im from sweeden
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nice geometry... make him bad.. his face look like a child, i can-t shoot him. let me found...
here.
look this bad guy..


nice model..



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JLMoondog
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Neo...that's not a bad guy, he just always looks grumpy.


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Master Man Of Justice
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Posted: 10th Oct 2010 07:33
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xD neo wants to be on the other side.

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Quik
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Posted: 10th Oct 2010 14:04
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maybe neo wants to shoot everything which looks bad!
XD


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SJHooks
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Posted: 10th Oct 2010 19:36
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Technically he's sort of bad until the end... but whatever, I agree with Neo; you should use a reference to draw your own face design, at the least, and then make the face based off of that. Look up on some anatomy pictures, that'll help.

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Nice model, maybe put a filter (with photoshop) on the clothing to make it look more natural. But that should sell otherwise

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Master Man Of Justice
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Posted: 14th Oct 2010 22:38 Edited at: 14th Oct 2010 22:38
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ahhh i also noticed something else, you didnt UVmap well, which is apparent by the stretched camo on various parts.
Unless you messed up on the actual diffuse.

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Quote: "here i'm making a character for fpsc what i want to sell for something like 4 $ what you think about ?"


Cosmic Prophet's soldiers surpass the quality of this model, in every way...and they are free.

There's not likely to be much of a shopping frenzy for this model, at any price.

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I think its a good start! Youd be suprised at the majic a good texture set will do for a model.... but it wont fix everything. Its definately not a lost cause... if you set up your vertex loops correctly adding detail should be a breeze... as far as a tutorial goes just do a search on uv mapping and then when you go to paint use a good reference. When I do a UV map i cut were seams would naturally be though this isnt always 100 percent possible, when it isnt, make them in hidden areas not likely to be seen in common camera angles. I.E when i have to make a seam for a legg or an arm i run it up under the armpit or in the case of a legg i run it from the crotch down. Then from your unwap pay special attention to how details are spaced by counting the verts at the seam so that you can line them up as close as possible. Anyway the goal is to make as few seams as possible and yet eliminate any stretch. Good luck and keep at it!

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Neodelito
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ha ha.. if you like i have somes ideas.. post your texture 512x512.



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PrimalBeans
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BTW... is he wearing mittens??

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Kira Vakaan
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Posted: 25th Oct 2010 01:39 Edited at: 25th Oct 2010 01:40
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Edit: Nevermind

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Quote: "Cosmic Prophet's soldiers surpass the quality of this model, in every way...and they are free.
There's not likely to be much of a shopping frenzy for this model, at any price. "
It is his first model, so I don't think that's very kind, maybe you missed this...

Quote: " i think give it for free in the fpsc chat."


Quote: "make him bad.. his face look like a child, i can-t shoot him. let me found"

Fpsc does have an ally system

@Dark Evenger
The textures a bit cartoonish, I could make a camo for you to put on the texture, give me your email or send me an email below


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Quik
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Posted: 27th Oct 2010 08:48
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Quote: "It is his first model, so I don't think that's very kind, maybe you missed this..."


I think he was pointing at the selling part.


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Poloflece
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Posted: 27th Oct 2010 11:12
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That would be rendered invalid by this

" i think give it for free in the fpsc chat."


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Quik
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Posted: 27th Oct 2010 12:28
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I didnt really read up, and it was long since i was on this thread so i assumed there was a price on it and therefore he was pointing that out.


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spudnick
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Nice Model for first try, at least it looks like a army man and not just a Orc that one cant compare against,

Would be nice to chat about how you started and what software you used and so on, fo others to learn from.

cheers and hop to see more of you models
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Posted: 16th Jan 2011 18:52
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beautiful model. But seriously a re-texture is needed. Honestly I would use that in my game, but I would slap on my own textures. Great start on modelling!
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