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Geek Culture / Dj Collaterals WIP remix to Three Six Mafia's: Lolli Lolli Pop That Body (Censored For Forum MOTD)

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Armageddon Games
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Posted: 21st Oct 2010 10:32 Edited at: 21st Oct 2010 10:35
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Heres some early progress on a remix im trying to cook up on my free time. C&C please.

I just wanted an outsiders point of view on this!

thanks.

the chorus has two different repeats to it--- I added both to see which ones you guys liked the most.. im kinda stuck i guess lol


please tell me which chorus you liked the most.

chorus number 1: Distortion Bassboost

chorus number 2: Heavy Chorus, Bass Boost ,Chops

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Neuro Fuzzy
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Posted: 21st Oct 2010 10:57
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1st thing I notice is that theres a break at 0:05, and at 1:17 theres a weird buzzing sound.


Iunno... it sounds like a song that I'd hear at a party, turned up really loud.

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Van B
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Posted: 21st Oct 2010 17:24
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It's too busy for my liking - which is always a problem with this style of music, it actually sounds like you have 3 different songs playing. It's too obvious to have tubular bells with anything these days, it should be banned. Not trying to offend you, but I'm not sure why you posted this, because there's very little of you in there, all I can hear are busy loops and lyrics I can't care about.

For me, I prefer more original stuff, mix in classics to your own loops, own basslines and drums - make it your own instead of sounding a bit like the music in Fast and Furious. If you need some inspiration, don't look at RnB - look at Pendulum and The Prodigy to see how the pro's re-invent classic songs. Stop trying to sound good enough and start trying to sound unique.

No offense... I'm not your target audience so I can only go with my own thoughts - I think that the best DJ's out there are the ones who go against the grain, be a dissident, music will always need dissidents.

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Posted: 21st Oct 2010 17:26 Edited at: 21st Oct 2010 17:27
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I like it quite a bit, it's pretty awesome.
I like between 0:01 and 0:46 alot.

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Posted: 21st Oct 2010 17:34
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its got the bass to be a party song, it just needs more variation maybe 2 breakdowns throw in there would sound good

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Posted: 21st Oct 2010 20:46 Edited at: 21st Oct 2010 20:47
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Hip-hop/rap isin't really my thing, but

-at the begging and at 0:5, and most of the intro breaks I can hear a weird voice in the background
-Serious fruity free filter overdose on into voice
-Eliminate the background noise on the main rap (it sounds like a rain stick od'ing )
-1:17?
-The voice sounds like its extremely far away
-Make a thumpier kick, it just sounds like background vibration right now

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Posted: 21st Oct 2010 20:49
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Quote: "look at Pendulum and The Prodigy to see how the pro's re-invent classic songs. Stop trying to sound good enough and start trying to sound unique."


Van B.

i frequently listen to both groups. and yes i do compile and produce my own loops and samples... but sometimes i like to attempt to chop and screw a track.

Quote: "I like it quite a bit, it's pretty awesome.
I like between 0:01 and 0:46 alot."


thanks coke.

Quote: "its got the bass to be a party song, it just needs more variation maybe 2 breakdowns throw in there would sound good
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i know it does... i just dont have the patience with this song anymore lmao.

@Van B

I would like to invite you to take a listen to my other work.

http://www.soundclick.com/djcollateral

Maybe there is something in there that you would like a little better.

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Posted: 21st Oct 2010 20:50
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Quote: " fruity free filter "


what do you mean by that?

I used my mixer and a custom effectbank on my laptop to create that effect on Akons voice.

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Posted: 21st Oct 2010 20:55 Edited at: 21st Oct 2010 21:04
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Quote: "Quote: " fruity free filter "

what do you mean by that?

I used my mixer and a custom effectbank on my laptop to create that effect on Akons voice."


Oh nvm, it just sounds exactly like a plugin iv'e heard...it weirds me out, just doesn't fit the song.

You should really try and throw some creativity in there though, right now it just sounds really unoriginal

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Posted: 21st Oct 2010 22:53
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this is probably my worst attempt on a remix ever tho.... i have to be honest there. btu check out that page link i posted i've got most my tracks streaming there.

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