Ok. I have played your game.
First of all, paths into nowhere are a BIG no-no.
Anyway...
Good Points
-I really liked the way you had the burned beams appear as a thatched roof.
-I also liked your use of some vegetation in the town level.
-The way the enemies all sort of converged on you at the one time was really nice, though I believe somewhat accidental.
-No performance issues.
-The recordings, although out of place and unclear, added atmosphere.
Bad Points
-The paths stopping suddenly... not good!
-It would have been better if you had stated that the enter key had been replaced by the 'e' key.
-Lighting was poor.
-Level design was basic:
--->How did those cars get into those rooms? Through those tiny doors?
--->It was sometimes unclear as to what direction I should be going. This is irritating and will stop anyone from playing your game.
--->Levels had very little decor, especially the town maps.
Anyway... Good Job and have a

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Also, try to abide by our laws here. Some people will chew off your toes before you have the chance to straighten things out. You have to treat these people 'nicely', not with an attitude.
Over and Out
~JRH
My karma ran over your dogma.