Oh I didn't even see the dates lol
It's much better now.
From your feed:
Quote: "The chart below shows the 50 highest pre-ordered games for the years of 2009-2010. The top of the list is held off by the Call of Duty series and the Halo series. This isn't a surprise as both of these series were some of the greatest games ever made. Just check the list out for yourself."
I would avoid making comments like that because that is just your opinion. You should try to be unbiased and draw conclusions from facts.
For example, I noticed that 360 seems to dominate the list, the top three titles are all 360 games, you could mention that or look for other interesting things like the fact that Fallout New Vegas is on the list in every platform, but on 360 it is ranked 11th, PS3 35th and PC all the way down at 50th.

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