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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / [X9] Darkline

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Dark Frager
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Posted: 28th Jan 2011 20:29 Edited at: 6th Feb 2011 20:28
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Darkline

Developer: Dark Frager

Story.

You play as John Russell. A man stronger than any other human. He chose to be in the army. He was put in squad one for his skills. However, his first assignment was not what he expected, he was promised a simple mission with a whole group of men to infiltrate a small base, Lies. When he finish his first assignment... He starts to realize that the truth is far from reality. He has to kill his own men to survive, he allies with the secret Russian force "Dark Plague" hoping to escape the nightmares of the U.S. Worst of all, the Dark Plague was not authorized by the Russian Government and is now being tracked down, your job is to get to the USA and convince the government that what you and the Dark Plague are doing is right and what the U.S and Russian Forces are doing is wrong.

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More to come!

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cmando
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Posted: 29th Jan 2011 01:54
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I like it
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Posted: 29th Jan 2011 02:13
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good atmosphere, but the maps could use a bit more environtment (e.g. background entities). that or just add a bit of grunge the the textures or add grunge overlays, but i definitly like where this is going.

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I like the concept of this game but the model too pixel try to open your setup ini,find ligtmapquality and change it into 50 so you will see the shadow on your game but it only work with static entity and static light.This game has a good pontential if you work hard.As you can see design its not easy,you need practice everyday so your game will become awsome.Maybe you can have a tip with someone professional like Wolf,Bugsy,Starmind,Me and many more but I recommend Wolf because he learning design about five years or Starmind as I see her design was great too.

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Dark Frager
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Posted: 29th Jan 2011 10:30
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Thanks for the tips people. Very appreciated.

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Dark Frager
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Posted: 29th Jan 2011 12:03
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I have taken all suggestions and remade the second picture into this:



How do you like it? Is it better now?

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cmando
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I cannot see a difference. There still needs to be more entities imo
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Dark Frager
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Posted: 29th Jan 2011 16:13
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I've updated the first post so it has the updated screenie. THIS is the old one:



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Posted: 29th Jan 2011 16:20
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Quote: "I cannot see a difference."

Oh god...

His last post with the new screen: Posted: 29th Jan 2011 13:03
His main post last updated : Edited: 29th Jan 2011 13:05

Now what does that tell you...

/End of that/

About your screenshots,I'm going to be completely honest , and with a chance of sounding like a complete arse,the atmosphere does not grab me at all.

The shadows from the overlays are really bad (which is not your fault,but making them dynamic might be better)

You could add some grafitti on the walls just for colour (or some signs)

You also might want to use shaders here and there,it really helps the overall look.

The story could use some depth,make the player actually get into the character's shoes.

One thing I found funny :
Quote: "he allies with the secret Russian force "Dark Plague" hoping to escape the nightmares of the U.S."

From one nightmare to another,if you understand what I mean.

Hope you don't take this as hate,but a gamer and developer's perspective.


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Posted: 29th Jan 2011 16:31
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Thanks for that Gencheff. I will try to make some things better using your advice.

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Posted: 29th Jan 2011 16:35
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Gencheff, im on an ipod touch at the moment so i didnt see that.
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Posted: 14th Feb 2011 18:07 Edited at: 14th Feb 2011 18:11
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Here is a small update guys, this is for the second level....





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I like the new pics, though the first one seems to feel empty, unless if that was your intention, even then should have some entities added. Second picture however is pretty good I like the entity placement I would just say lower the glow a bit.

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Posted: 14th Feb 2011 19:12
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Quote: "I like the new pics, though the first one seems to feel empty, unless if that was your intention, even then should have some entities added. Second picture however is pretty good I like the entity placement I would just say lower the glow a bit."


Thanks for the suggestions and comments.

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umm is there a logical reason how the cars got in the building, or are they just magically teleported in? And i would add some tires and car tools/equipment around the cars

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Posted: 14th Feb 2011 22:14 Edited at: 14th Feb 2011 22:15
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Quote: "umm is there a logical reason how the cars got in the building, or are they just magically teleported in?"


If you look closely there is a shutter door in front of the cars.

Thanks for the suggestions though.

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