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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / [X9] Thunderstorm - The Calm Before

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Ikey
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Posted: 1st Feb 2011 23:50 Edited at: 6th Apr 2011 00:56
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3Bit
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Oddly the picture won't load for me. Story sounds interesting though keep it up.
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 00:06 Edited at: 6th Apr 2011 00:57
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Just seen pic, entity placement is great so far, but yeah it fits more in the horror genre as you stated .

Looking foward to what you'll have next.

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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 02:38
Time to productively critisize

Why did Russia send 3 soldiers to kill brits?

How did Russia become communist again?

(THIS ONE IS IMPORTANT) Britain has an army, in fact it has the most elite fighting force in the world the SAS, so why is the USA dealing with their problems?

How is the Russian Army spread out, they are flipping huge! youve said theyve been killed (i think) but you haven't explained it properly.

This could easily be an amazing story but you need to remember realism makes these games better. Heres a tip, France and the USA are better friends now than the Brits and Americans are so an attack on French civilians staged as an act of terrorism (while really being a secret Russian operation) would now be more realistic than the Brits being attacked by Russians, also if Russia went back to communism it would need to expand to survive (invading east European countries) maybe it already controls the east and is preparing to launch a strike on the leaders of the European union (Germany, France, Britain) but before I go on rambling, Good luck with this game i hope to see it develop more!
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 07:49
Sounds like you've got an interesting story happening, and the screen looks pretty nice, but 2 FPS


Goodluck with this

Boom.
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 18:49 Edited at: 6th Apr 2011 00:57
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 19:21
Good! i will watch this project eagerly !

can't wait for the revised story!
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 19:33 Edited at: 6th Apr 2011 00:58
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 20:12 Edited at: 2nd Feb 2011 20:14
Hmm, Sounds Interesting.

maybe when i have to some spare time i can try to re-write the story for you, due to the fact that i love writing/rewriting storylines.
If interested, Contact me @ pekelaar39@live.nl.

I'm also good in Radio voices, so just meesage me if you need help


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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 20:33
Dude Im not doing much now and can't really do much but if you don't mind me popping in now and again and adding bits to the story do you, cause i reaaally like this idea.
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 20:43 Edited at: 6th Apr 2011 00:58
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 20:59
Dude the new story looks a lot more solid and i would love to write up a large view version (looking at the whole war) and then maybe you could put these on the loading screens to add something to the story. But if you want me to help i think that I can do the story writing and with the 2 (maybe 3!) of us the game will probrably turn out to if anything be remembered for a brilliant story.
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 21:04 Edited at: 6th Apr 2011 00:59
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 21:26
Heh the good old days... yeah I loved inventing world conquest ideas... anyways

The loading screen idea you said animated ones! I WAS GOING TO WRITE THAT IN MY LAST COMMENT but thought you didn't want to copy COD.

btw could you tell me a bit about the story you came up with so i could look over it once or twice to see what the storys gunna be like so that i could start looking for holes or help. lets not rush though or we'll use our energy up in the first few days.
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I love the name.. Just saying.
And Great, unique story, not the average, 'oh no a nuke, must destroy' or 'alien atacking our ship, must make 3 games, then one that takes place before all of them, then another in the middle and a last one before all of them'
I will definetly be watching this good luck.

Oh and above was a Halo reference

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Sweet, same with me, I'm going to stick had on my game as well, I still need to purchase 341 charactrs for it, so until I do I wont have any demo's, just updates

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You still cant DL? was it order approved by TGC?
also check out my wip thread, game name is 205 : N.A.N.

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Okay sweet! Yea I know, it feels like years till I can order mine.
I have to wait to get my new laptop (2 weeks or sooner) cause I have no space on my current which is a Mac..

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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 23:07 Edited at: 2nd Feb 2011 23:08
sorry i didn't mean to imply you were copying i geuss i didn't word it properly and give me a mo to get my email up "connorjohnegan@hotmail.co.uk" done! also about enemy placing, if your having trouble you can just think COD: black ops enemy positioning (specifically the rooftop spetznaz mission and the snow base infiltration one). btw is the war just between the UK and communist Russia or are the EU involved or members of it.
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Posted: 3rd Feb 2011 09:42
The newer storyline is much better and adds more depth with a quick glance however there still seems to be two plot holes that i can't but help fall down.

Why did the extreme communists attack British civilians? is it simply they don't like British people or was the spy they killed British and caused them to get a dishonourable discharge. the explanation you've given so far doesn't read properly.

The UK would probably invade Russia but the Communist Force would need to be massive with uprisings everywhere but a particularly large one in Moscow we are talking about hundreds of thousands of people.

The Russians would only pull forces away from fighting the communists if they though they were going to win this "civil war" in a way so maybe they were winning sent soldiers to fight off the British invasion and then a second wave of communist rebels came and succeeded in a final push against the loyalist forces.

Now on a different note. I like the fact that in a way the Russians and Brits come to a stalemate. This stalemate could be what forces the communists to start expanding, to try and gain more resources and troops. The new story is well though out congrats it really is something quite nice and should be a refreshing change from playing as Americans and just trying to kill everything.
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Posted: 4th Feb 2011 10:37 Edited at: 6th Apr 2011 01:02
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Posted: 4th Feb 2011 18:13
Great! btw i won't be able to post for a few days going away for a mini-hol without my laptop. but still it'll be interesting to see how it develops while im gone!
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Posted: 7th Feb 2011 04:44
The story is very good

However, the screenshot seems uninspired. Give us something that will "Wow!" us as your first screenshot.

Looking good, keep it up.


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Posted: 9th Feb 2011 15:58
I'm back and just to say

EPIC!

great stuff here! can't wait for the full story and gameplay!
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Posted: 11th Feb 2011 21:10
Well, if you want to have your game "tested", then upload whatever you got and give the link to some volunteering forum members (or everyone if you are convinced of your works quality).

Otherwise you risk of just wasting your time with a build that gets no decent FPS on any PC

In case you find my grammar and spelling weird ---> native German speaker ^^
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I just realized your story is oddly similar to Call of Duty 4's, with elements of Modern Warfare 2.

Quote: "One month ago, a troop of recently dismissed Russians fired upon a heavily populated high street in London. Hundreds of civilians were killed, and many buildings burnt to the ground."


Could be either the attack on the airport in Modern Warfare 2, or could be the nuke set off by Al-Asad in the first Modern Warfare.

Quote: "These men were extremist communists, and sacked for firing upon a target that was supposed to be brought alive. This target was thought to be a spy, having been snooping around Russian military bunkers and laboratories.

The troop of ex-Russian soldiers seemed to disappear, nothing being heard from them for a week. The UK government wanted justice, and they wanted it fast. They sent men into Russia to find them. "


Very close to Nikolai, and how you had to rescue him as he was an "inside man."

Quote: "After a single shot was fired, an all out battle began, spreading into a war between the two nations swiftly. Many holidayers from the UK were taken hostage, and after a large debate in Moscow, the Russian Government as overthrown, falling back into communism."


The massacre in the airport in Modern Warfare 2 triggered a war, not to mention the government was overthrown by the Ultranationalists.

As stated above, you really give no background as to how or why these events happened. Some Russians got fired from the military so they start a war? Makes no sense, unless I'm just not understanding.

I just now realized I've had a typo in my signature for the past 3 years.
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Posted: 17th Mar 2011 19:29 Edited at: 6th Apr 2011 01:02
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Posted: 30th Mar 2011 18:22 Edited at: 6th Apr 2011 01:00
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Posted: 6th Apr 2011 01:04
To any moderator:
Please close this thread, or if possible, delete it.

To anyone watching the develpoment of this game:
The game has NOT been cancelled. However, I have decided that I would like to withdraw ANY details at all until it is further along the line. Thanks, Ikey.


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why?

I'd have to say........ The Game Creators can make dreams come true.
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Posted: 6th Apr 2011 23:03 Edited at: 7th Apr 2011 21:12
I've recently had to pause all work on it for various reasons. Because of the constant complications and the small amount of work I have done level wise, I feel it would make more sense to keep it secret until it is closer to the release date. By the time I create a new thread, I WILL have at least one video of gameplay. I am also working full time on a sub-project for Thunderstorm at the moment, and cannot handle keeping a post up to date.


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Edit: Nevermind

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