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Geek Culture / Need an opinion on this W.I.P Track (Still Dreaming of Tommorow V2.0)

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DJ Almix
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Posted: 2nd Feb 2011 05:02 Edited at: 2nd Feb 2011 05:04
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Genre: Rock/Classical/Epic
Time: 4:46
BPM: 140
KBS: 128kBs

Comments and Criticism Welcome.


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MrValentine
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Posted: 3rd Feb 2011 01:18
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Nice! DJ Almix...

I can see this being... (more hear this lol) used in some sort of adventure role-play game of sorts as an opening theme, what will you be using it for? or just making for distribution?

any more examples of your work? a web-site perhaps where I can sample your work?

eitherway you have some great talent- keep it up!, just my opinion. ^^

regards

MrValentine

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budokaiman
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Posted: 3rd Feb 2011 01:45 Edited at: 3rd Feb 2011 01:45
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The first minute and half seem like a large departure from what you usually do. Then it kind of mashes two genres together and sounds a little off. I think that you should keep it more ambient, with just the first synthesizers and the drums, if you keep the guitar sounds too, you should make them sound a bit more like an actual guitar. At the moment they sound really fake. Other than that, it sounds good, just needs some work.

Quote: "any more examples of your work? a web-site perhaps where I can sample your work?"

http://www.last.fm/music/DJ+Almix


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DJ Almix
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Posted: 3rd Feb 2011 03:55 Edited at: 3rd Feb 2011 04:00
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Quote: "Nice! DJ Almix...

I can see this being... (more hear this lol) used in some sort of adventure role-play game of sorts as an opening theme, what will you be using it for? or just making for distribution?

any more examples of your work? a web-site perhaps where I can sample your work?

eitherway you have some great talent- keep it up!, just my opinion. ^^

regards

MrValentine"


Thanks, I made this just for the heck of it.

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Check out my other song "Talking to a God"

Quote: "The first minute and half seem like a large departure from what you usually do. Then it kind of mashes two genres together and sounds a little off. I think that you should keep it more ambient, with just the first synthesizers and the drums, if you keep the guitar sounds too, you should make them sound a bit more like an actual guitar. At the moment they sound really fake. Other than that, it sounds good, just needs some work."


I've decided to get rid of the guitar all together, as I can't get it just right.

Attached is an electronic/classical song I need some critique on called "I think I hear a Melody"


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