Quote: "When the U.S economy crashed, all hell broke loose. Countries around the world wanted their money so they decided to destroy the United States. The countries then formed the group called the Alkena Republic that is completely against the U.S. While they were destroying the U.S, they sent five nuclear bombs. One on the White House, one on the Pentagon, one on New York, another in A-51 (Area-51) and the last one in Minnesota. However, the nuke in New York did not explode; it spread radiation all over, mutating people into mindless creatures. Why the hell am I still alive?"
Fixed a few typos.
The story doesn't seem quite plausible, as the economy has crashed majorly several times in US history, not resulting in any war. And, the "mindless creatures" thing is just so...generic. I'd recommend maybe having the warring countries invading the US and not nuking it (or at least not so heavily...), as the fallout of said nukes would more than likely drift to Canada and Mexico. Only the US, UK, India, Pakistan, France, China, Israel, and Russia have nukes. Of course, Iran and North Korea are both likely to have nuclear weapons... No one in their right minds would really nuke the US, though there are some crazy people out there...
And there would
not be any chance of anyone nuking the White House
and the Pentagon. They're too close together.
My several cents.
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