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darimc
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Posted: 19th Jul 2011 21:46
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Looks much, much better. Good work on reading the criticism and actually improving on it.

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Beno09
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Quote: "Looks much, much better. Good work on reading the criticism and actually improving on it.
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Thank you for your critics, that helped a lot to me. I am just hoping that more people will look this and say something that they do not like or maybe like
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Beno09
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I learned a lot of things from you guys and I am hoping that I will learn even more.
Some new pictures from new room. I hope you like it guys, I will just move candle from front of the picture Comment if something is wrong or if you like it





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Leongamerz
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Oh man I really like it.I think my tutorial is help you alot.Well done do not stop this project.Its just become more cool!.Show them that you are not the noob in design.I will send you the gift through your email.

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Beno09
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Quote: "Oh man I really like it.I think my tutorial is help you alot.Well done do not stop this project.Its just become more cool!.Show them that you are not the noob in design.I will send you the gift through your email."

Thank you Leon, you are my best motivation to continue I am working on it really hard and I want to make every piece in game to look good as best as I can I am waiting for the gift Thank you again !

Are there only few guys that like this game ?
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Posted: 26th Jul 2011 17:11
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This is looking absolutely fantastic mate! The last screenshots you posted are very atmospheric!

Just one critique, how about placing the light a little above the candle on the side table/cupboard, so that it casts a shadow on the table/cupboard rather than on the wall.

Abdul Ahad

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Beno09
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Posted: 27th Jul 2011 11:31
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Quote: "This is looking absolutely fantastic mate! The last screenshots you posted are very atmospheric!

Just one critique, how about placing the light a little above the candle on the side table/cupboard, so that it casts a shadow on the table/cupboard rather than on the wall.

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Thank you Abdul Ahad for comment.
Yes, I will try to place light little bit above the candle, thank you for critique

Few more pictures for new room that I started




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Beno09
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Posted: 28th Jul 2011 14:23
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New pictures, this room is not finished I must put some more things
If you have suggestion what I need to put in or if you do not like something please comment, also if you like it







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michael x
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Posted: 28th Jul 2011 18:59
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this game is looking really good.

more than what meets the eye

Welcome to SciFi Summer
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Beno09
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Posted: 28th Jul 2011 22:11
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Quote: "this game is looking really good."

Thank you micheal x, I appreciate your comment
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Leongamerz
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Nice you are really improving now.I send you the gift.Ok I like the design and I just want to say congrats.

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Posted: 29th Jul 2011 12:02
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Quote: "Nice you are really improving now.I send you the gift.Ok I like the design and I just want to say congrats."

Thanks Leon This gift will be very useful and also this is good, thank you again !

I know, maybe I am boring with all these pictures but I have now 2 more





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Looks really good Beno.Nice Atmosphere

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Posted: 30th Jul 2011 15:09
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Quote: "Looks really good Beno.Nice Atmosphere"

Thanks Leon, every your comment is good

2 another pictures





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Posted: 30th Jul 2011 15:59 Edited at: 30th Jul 2011 19:41
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Yehaa you all see my student was succes on level design!.Iam very proud of you,well done.

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Posted: 30th Jul 2011 16:31
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Beautiful work there bro!!

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Posted: 30th Jul 2011 23:20 Edited at: 30th Jul 2011 23:21
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Quote: "Yehaa you all see my student was succes on level design!.Iam very proud of you,well done."

Thank you master, I will try to be even better
Quote: "Beautiful work there bro!!

Abdul Ahad"

Thanks bro

Soon I will post some more pictures
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3 another pictures, just please comment guys if you like it or not







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Posted: 31st Jul 2011 01:22 Edited at: 31st Jul 2011 01:24
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Looks good!

Might I suggest adding an illuminationent.fx shader to that light source, in the back, in the third screen.

Abdul Ahad

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Leongamerz
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Its really nice Beno.The design was cool and atmosphere its fit in this game.As AbdulAhad said yes use illuminationent.fx.Well done

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Quote: "Looks good!

Might I suggest adding an illuminationent.fx shader to that light source, in the back, in the third screen.

Abdul Ahad"

Thank you bro again, thanks for suggestion I will try that
Quote: "Its really nice Beno.The design was cool and atmosphere its fit in this game.As AbdulAhad said yes use illuminationent.fx.Well done"

Thanks Leon for great comments !

I lost motivation for new rooms, maybe I will just take one day holiday, but if you guys have some suggestions for new rooms please suggest
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Posted: 31st Jul 2011 20:12
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Quote: "I lost motivation for new rooms, maybe I will just take one day holiday, but if you guys have some suggestions for new rooms please suggest"


Take your time there mate. Try out some of the other fpsc games for inspiration.

Abdul Ahad

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The new lighting is great, some parts remind me of Amnesia on the visual style.

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Posted: 31st Jul 2011 22:45
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Quote: "Take your time there mate. Try out some of the other fpsc games for inspiration.

Abdul Ahad"

Thanks mate, I will try, good suggestion
Quote: "The new lighting is great, some parts remind me of Amnesia on the visual style."

Oh, this is big comment for me I can not believe that you are comparing my game to Amnesia, thank you very much !

I see that finally more people are starting to comment on this game but I am hoping that even more people are looking here and that they will comment, I need that. This is my first game mates
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After one day pause, I am starting again I get some inspiration but these seven pictures are not ready rooms. I must put some more stuffs and effects I just want to now if you like it
First picture is re-design from one of first rooms, other pictures are new and from new room



















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Woah looks like in the cave.Nice one

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Quote: "Woah looks like in the cave.Nice one"

Thanks Leon, it is something like cave right now I will have more suprises soon with pictures

I am little bit dissapointed with lack of comments but that is probably because this game is not so good.
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Posted: 1st Aug 2011 19:26 Edited at: 1st Aug 2011 19:27
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Quote: "I am little bit dissapointed with lack of comments but that is probably because this game is not so good"


No.Your game is actually good but you need to be patient for awhile.I believe your game is good

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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It's looking 100 times better. Keep up the good work!

Perhaps some of those lanterns in the last pictures are emitting just a little too much light, but it's something you'd need to experiment with.
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Quote: "It's looking 100 times better. Keep up the good work!

Perhaps some of those lanterns in the last pictures are emitting just a little too much light, but it's something you'd need to experiment with."

Thanks, I will keep good work Yeah, I will low lights little bit on lanterns, thanks for suggestion !

Just one another picture, what do you think about this ? I am not sure that I will put this in, just say what do you think !

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Humm I cannot see picture clearly or maybe my eyes wrong?.Anyway I think the lighting is good.I hope you can fix the picture.Did you try my segment,I just wanna know.

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Quote: "Humm I cannot see picture clearly or maybe my eyes wrong?.Anyway I think the lighting is good.I hope you can fix the picture.Did you try my segment,I just wanna know."

This picture is just a first test, I will post soon better view. Thanks for lighting. Yes I tried you segment, later will be pictures with your segment on work
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I can't wait for release!.Remember if you need any help,email me ok.

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Quote: "I can't wait for release!.Remember if you need any help,email me ok."

Thanks Leon for help on this project Release date is unknown, this is my first game and I want to do this project very good I will later send you email with alpha version of game. I just want to known do you like design, there are no enemies and sounds, also there is only few rooms

Now I am doing some ancient caves or something like that. This pictures are also tests so feel free to comment every thing. I just started these rooms and need to do a more work and i decided to show you these two pictures because they are best unfinished for me




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Oh wow your design is really good.Its really like in ancient cave.Well Done!

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Everythings looking great! But the last picture its to dark I can't tell what it is :\ just a bit brighter...

@Leo

Do you know when spud comes back from camping?

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Quote: "Do you know when spud comes back from camping?"


Wednesday,as I know:-|

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Quote: "Everythings looking great! But the last picture its to dark I can't tell what it is :\ just a bit brighter..."

Thanks I again say this pictures are just some test, later I will put better pictures
Leon check your email

Do you like these lighting in caves or should I put something else ?




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Well, after looking through your screens, only 1 thing comes to mind. Do you know how to use illumination effects?
I think that if you do, you should apply them to your light models. Maybe not necessarily the candle stick but maybe
the lamps and wall lights. That's just my opinion though.

As for the harsh blue lighting... I think its a far-cry from what you've already implemented, style-wise.
I think it should be a light blue if any blue, to sort of make the transition better.
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Quote: "Well, after looking through your screens, only 1 thing comes to mind. Do you know how to use illumination effects?
I think that if you do, you should apply them to your light models. Maybe not necessarily the candle stick but maybe
the lamps and wall lights. That's just my opinion though.

As for the harsh blue lighting... I think its a far-cry from what you've already implemented, style-wise.
I think it should be a light blue if any blue, to sort of make the transition better."

To be honest I don't know how to apply illumination effects to light models because this is my first game but I am trying to learn as much as I can. Can you give me a point have to use illumination effects. I made change for lighting in caves i put the fire for source of lighting, here is picture, tell me what you think please

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Sorry for double post, but I have some updates from deep caves New pictures, I hope that you like them and comment also










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Very nice, absolutely wonderful.

Effective, Efficient, Capable and Committed... That's me!
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Its to dark for me.Set ambience to 4 or maybe 6 anyway the caves looks cool

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Thank you
Quote: "Its to dark for me.Set ambience to 4 or maybe 6 anyway the caves looks cool"

I will try and see how is looking ambience on 4 and 6, thanks for caves

Just one another picture Comment

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Humm level design looks good but lighting need to improve.Just played the demo and there is no bug.As I say lighting need to be improve.

Poloflece,Anayar,PWP,Henry Ham,Cosmic Prophet,Wolf,KeithC,Nickydude,Dark Goblin And Lee Bamber is my icon.

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Quote: "I don't know how to apply illumination effects to light models because this is my first game"


Grab the entity and right-click. Some options will come up for the object. Look for the "Effect" slot. If you click the little
grey button it will let you select an effect. It should open you to the effectbank. Click "illuminatent.fx" or something like that.

I'd only do it to light sources like the lamp. It will give then a cool glow around them and it looks very nice.

Best of luck.

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Quote: "Grab the entity and right-click. Some options will come up for the object. Look for the "Effect" slot. If you click the little
grey button it will let you select an effect. It should open you to the effectbank. Click "illuminatent.fx" or something like that.

I'd only do it to light sources like the lamp. It will give then a cool glow around them and it looks very nice.

Best of luck."

Thanks man, this will be useful
I have some problems and that is main reason because i did not updated this thread, I will aslo open new thread for my new game soon
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Here is link of beta version of game. It has 2 small missions and it do not have any story parts just shoting, I wanted to test that. This beta I finished about 2 weeks ago and it has some problems. It does not work on some Win 7 64 bit versions If someone download this please leave a feedback

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=B0SUE9OO
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The screens get better and better with each visit - there are still a few things that could be improved!

I agree that the screens with the dark blue lighting are miles away from your other screens. They look amateurish in comparison to the cave scenes.

From what I can see you are also lighting your rooms well - continue to provide good lighting and illuminate any objects that the player might get stuck on - It's very annoying to get trapped against objects you can't see!

In the last screen, while I like the ruins and torches, the room looks too big and empty. I also don't like the different colours of lighting on each floor - it makes the top floor look really out of place - almost from a different game.

I think if you added torches to the top floor, keeping the lighting colour and sources consistent, the scene would come together better.

You should also change the skybox, as the default gas one is very dull. Finally - more sunlight should spill through those windows.
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@Butt monkey: Thanks for these suggestions, I will use them all but I am creating this game very small time. I have new game that I am creating and I have big ideas for new game but I will finish Life is Hard i promise. If you want to see new game here is link http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=188405&b=25
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