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FPSC Classic Showcase / [X9][1.18] The Viper Chronicles Demo

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King Cobra
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Posted: 5th Aug 2011 13:33 Edited at: 5th Aug 2011 13:40
The Viper Chronicles


Developer: Pavon Dunbar, Viper Studios

Producer: Arsen B Productions

Website: http://www.theviperchronicles.com--currently under construction

Story:

You play Vida Viper, a young assassin and former right hand to The President of The United States. After discovering a conspiracy the President is involved in between The Cyborgs and The Aliens, you convince the President to inform you of the conspiracy. Refusing to divulge the information, The President avoids all contact with you and relieves you of your duties as his right hand.

Upon investigation, you discover the conspiracy: a plot to establish a New World Order on planet Earth among The Humans, The Aliens, and The Cyborgs. However, you discover something else as well--something that could possibly put the Earth in grave danger.

You gather a small group of mercenaries and proceed to go underground until...

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Please critique this game. I appreciate your feedback.

Download:

http://www.theviperchronicles.com/TVCDemo.rar

Thank you all in advance. I sincerely appreciate it!

GAME ON!!!

--King Cobra

EDIT: This game does have offensive language you guys...

Omegamer
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Posted: 5th Aug 2011 13:45 Edited at: 5th Aug 2011 13:47
Well it looks pretty empty U need more entitys also lightning looks boring.
Also you shouldnt mix weapons from different artists since everyone uses his own hands and its bad if you have some weapons with EAI hands which are awesome, and some weapons completly without hands but maybe thats just me
Try to improve the lightning its the most important thing to do yet
The best start is to lower the ambience to 5-10 and then place strong lights.
Or lower it to 0 (like I do in all my games) and then try to get learned in lightmapping.

I will try the demo ASAP to give you more feedback only one last thing:
The player shouldn´t have more health than 100 because its just unrealistic.

Good luck with the game I see potential if you work much more o it

Omegamer
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Posted: 5th Aug 2011 14:45 Edited at: 5th Aug 2011 14:45
Okay I just gave it a short run and here´s the problems I had:

1.The knife does make bulletholes if you attack a wall,you can prevent that by writing the command "noscorch = 1" to its gunspec, which is compatible with vanilla FPSC since version 1.17 or sowhat.
2.When I was in front of the Desert Eagle a text appeared and I wasn´t able to move which was really really bad because spiders attacked me of all sides and my char was doing a monolog with himself?
Somethings not right
3.I remember these monsterspawn sounds to 100% and they are under copyright of Acclaim they build them into Turok 2.
Where did you get the sounds,I want to see where you got this
4.The lightning is very boring because you´re only using red lights and also there aren´t very much environment objects who make it worth to explore the level.
You just want to get trough it as fast as possbile.

Sorry if it sounds like your game is bad,you just need to improve your leveldesign since it looks like you did it all in 5 minutes.
I as example put around 2 hours in a single room.

Sorry if I sound a little harsh I just want to give ya' feedback

KeithC
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Posted: 5th Aug 2011 16:21
Only 2 screenshots are allowed in the first post; please take care of that. The images also load slow; you might want to consider converting them from .bmp to .jpg or .png.

-Keith

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Posted: 5th Aug 2011 16:25
They already are .bmp

KeithC
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Posted: 5th Aug 2011 17:45
Quote: "They already are .bmp"


Uh...yeah...that's why I said convert them "from" .BMP.

-Keith

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Posted: 5th Aug 2011 18:03
Oh yeah didnt read it carefully enough

rolfy
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Posted: 6th Aug 2011 03:25
With framerates like that (5-7 fps)even using screen capture, the game looks unplayable. You really need to put a lot more work into this particularly the lighting, its more WIP than Showcase right now.
In your ninth screenshot the character is covered in alpha planes which I assume are meant to be hairs of some kind, that needs fixed.

Would have been better to ask for critique to improve things in WIP before posting it here.

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Wolf
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Posted: 6th Aug 2011 21:20
Everything is wrong that could possibly be wrong. Could you please at least read the community guide?

There is nothing I could give constructive criticism on.



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maho76
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Posted: 7th Aug 2011 18:32
@wolf: there is no god! accept it
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Posted: 8th Aug 2011 13:36
Nice work.


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