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Geek Culture / [LOCKED] What do you think of my logo?

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Slayer267
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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 19:31
I need some constructive criticism. What do you think of my logo?

THE CARNAGE PRODUCTIONS WEBSITE IS NOW UP!

www.Carnageproduct.webs.com

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DJ Almix
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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 20:03
It looks very un-professional,

Just by looking at it I can tell all the Photoshop filters you used.


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Slayer267
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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 20:04
... Name em...

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Dark Frager
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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 20:10
The font and explosion look horribly retarded imo. However the Black background thingy looks cool.

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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 20:19 Edited at: 16th Jan 2012 20:19
Quote: "I need some constructive criticism."




The background looks cool, the text looks cool. What doesn't fit is the explosion. I think you should get an "icon" version of the explosion so it matches the background, something like this (shamefully ripped from StarCraft II).

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DJ Almix
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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 20:25
- Bevel and emboss
- Drop Shadow
- Stained glass
- Texture
- Lens Flare


and the font you used was: MATISSE


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NIlooc223
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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 20:36
Looks pretty good I dont like the explosion or font... mabey try some other font try downloading some off the internet

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heyufool1
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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 20:45 Edited at: 16th Jan 2012 20:47
To be 100% honest, I'm not a fan of the name "Carnage Productions". It's too generic and screams, "I am probably new to game development and I am probably younger than 16!!". Pick something unique, something with some personal value or anything to stick out from the rest. I would prefer to see a fake company name of "Stinky Potatoes" than "Carnage Productions".

As for the logo, pretty much everything everyone else already mentioned. A logo has to have some relevance to the name and all I see is the explosion which honestly still doesn't match too well. If you do decide to stick with your current name then pick something directly related to carnage. For example, when I think of carnage I think blood, so maybe try a simple design like "Carnage Productions" spelled out to look like blood with some drips or something. I know that's not too original, but a logo shouldn't be a bunch of random pictures slapped together (like it is now). Also, adding the photoshop blending effects (unless used correctly) usually makes the logo worse.

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Slayer267
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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 20:47
Damn you Dj...

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Le Shorte
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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 22:38
@Slayer
Why would you curse DJ for doing exactly what you told him to do?

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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 22:41
Quote: "Damn you Dj..."


1. Do not curse

2. Why didn't you just post this in your project thread?

3. "Carnage Productions" Carnage indeed...

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Slayer267
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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 22:42
No I said damn u because he was right

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Posted: 16th Jan 2012 23:14 Edited at: 16th Jan 2012 23:18
get rid of the explosion and basicly everything except for the black-grey backround thingy and you got a fine logo

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the explotion is extremely badly cut considering the sharp edges, it doesnt fit with the rest.
all the filters makes it look like.. well if I made it (and i aint no good with logos..)


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Posted: 17th Jan 2012 00:23 Edited at: 17th Jan 2012 00:24
Srry, wrong one.

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