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Pincho Paxton

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Posted: 15th Mar 2012 18:22

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I used to write poems years ago. I was just emailed by poetry.com to remind me of a poem I wrote ages ago.

The Sun And The Sea In Harmony

The Sun, and Sea go hand in hand
One in the air, and one on land
The Sun goes down to lick the Sea
The Sea licks Sand, and now there's three
The Sun leaves the room, in a fiery rage
The Moon comes in to spoil the day
The Sea gets rougher as time goes by
The Seaman takes a bumpy ride
But all of this must end in doom
There's way too many in the room
And as the sun comes back to play
Things become clear as night and day
They all get on when left in pairs
It's better not to mix affairs
So what went wrong let's ask the man
What went wrong with the Sun, Moon, Sea, and Sand
The Seaman explains in a simple quote
That on their own their love has hope
The Sun And Sea together float
But All together they rock the boat!

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gozzy1999

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Posted: 15th Mar 2012 18:27

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its good i like it

''Make sure your hands are clean before you point the finger''

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zenassem

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Posted: 16th Mar 2012 06:12

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Awesome!!!

Here is a poem that I'm working on. It still needs some tweaking.

And The Ship Sails On As Such

Quote: "
This ship's still sailing
Even when I'm drowning
I look around
Hear my calling?
Feel my longing?
Taste my pasted tongue... then swallow
Smell of sea salt breezes
Mind is sound
Brain freezes
My ears drowned out by the sound filling me
Yet I still seem hollow
Don't follow me
I've not yet found solid ground
You see
I'm at sea

A hammer to my heart... beat pounding
Voice still sounding
I long to feel outside myself
Tired of hearing myself
Why do I listen to myself?
Sound Mind?
Mind me
Mind you

The universe is infinite
And yet, I chose to get locked in the pocket of a jacket of a little boy's coat
That has a torn sleeve
Whose best friend's a hand sock puppet
Who just so happened to lend us this boat

Imaginary lands we travel to
Hoisted sails
Dropped anchor
Tied to the mooring
Too tired this morning
Can't see too far ahead
Can't turn back
Time ticks fast
Can't live in the past
Though the boy would like it much

I'm a thinker of tinker toys
Of failed plots
Follower of foolish ploys
Disconnected dots
Unforgiving knots
And the ship sails on as such
"

.oO()Oo.oO (I'm not a real programmer,, I just play one on the Forums!!!) Oo.oO()Oo.

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bitJericho

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