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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / FREAK...it's just the beginning....Work in progress

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Posted: 25th Oct 2012 13:17
Hey guys...
i have been working on a zombie survival game known as Freak..
so far i have build 3 levels and i think that it still needs some improvement...

PLOT:
You play as Charlie...a lazy but clever son of a police officer...
Late at night you gain consciousness in your room and found blood everywhere in the room.It was soon clear that it was a zombie invasion in your house.Taking your dad's pistol you battle pass zombies to reach your car for an escape...No time to relax as your car hit a zombie and got rolled over on a road near a small forest..Its time to find your way through the woods to reach the main highway and somehow get to the hospital to find some cure for the already spreading zombie infection in your body..

screenshot attached..


please download the 3 level game and give me your feedback like good and bad points...some ideas or even some good addition to make..

download link..

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?c8x9qa1b8dvy9qa

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Posted: 25th Oct 2012 13:19
another screenshot

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one more

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Posted: 25th Oct 2012 17:07
I would recomend uploading your screen shots as Jpeg so we do not have to download to veiw your screen shots.

Me = noob

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Posted: 26th Oct 2012 08:57
ok...here you go..

http://www.mediafire.com/view/?5c8dzwspuc2g239

http://www.mediafire.com/view/?j9cqrs740ryrfst


skybox is missing from game for some reason....if you download the game...please copy a night sky to the skybank folder ...that's it...enjoy..

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screen1 jpg

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Posted: 26th Oct 2012 09:00
screen2

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Posted: 26th Oct 2012 15:47
Much Better thank you. I like the lighting Idea to use with the Sky (moon) but I would also sugest adding a light up at a very high level pointing from the Moon to give a Moonish effeft. Make sure the color is a very light blue. It will brighten the scene up so the player can see just a little more and at the same time keep the setting dark. See my previous game I made a while back with the same Idea. (you might need to scroll down a bit)

http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=122884&b=25

Just an Idea, you will need to play around with the settings to get it just right.


I do like how you got the Tree set on fire in picture two, just why would that be the only thing flaming. I would suggest Rethinking the Idea of the Entities Layouts. Kinda Put the Idea "Why would this be here, would this realisticly be here if this was realy life"

Just another Tip that helps me make maps look a notch up from FPSC.

I am not trying to slam your game, just trying to give you helpfull tips on how to make it even better then what you have. Cause you can never have to much "better".

What you have is a fantastic start, the story is good and the layout looks decent.

Just add the above to the game and it will go from decent to GREAT!

PAIN!

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Posted: 27th Oct 2012 08:09
@pain
should i increase the blue ambience a bit higher than red and green....will it give a moonish effect...

i will definitely upgrade my entity layout...

and oh should i continue on this game?

here's another screenshot...

When i was born,Devil said Oh crap..competition..

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Posted: 27th Oct 2012 08:11
another...

charlie's car crashed..

When i was born,Devil said Oh crap..competition..

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Posted: 27th Oct 2012 08:12
one more... survival in the woods..

When i was born,Devil said Oh crap..competition..

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Posted: 27th Oct 2012 08:15
@pain..

your game looks awesome..

thank you for your tips...will come in handy..

When i was born,Devil said Oh crap..competition..
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Posted: 27th Oct 2012 09:01
I like the whole feeling of venerability I get when I play this game since there is little to know light and Im forced to go into the unknown, but I do have a little problem I cant seem to see the zombies or what ever's attacking me. Other than that keep it up I like to be scared

Im getting to it
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Posted: 27th Oct 2012 16:24
@mrYOLOMeh

you joined tomorrow..???

welcome.

i will soon update the fixed download with improved ambience and skybox..

When i was born,Devil said Oh crap..competition..

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