Much Better thank you. I like the lighting Idea to use with the Sky (moon) but I would also sugest adding a light up at a very high level pointing from the Moon to give a Moonish effeft. Make sure the color is a very light blue. It will brighten the scene up so the player can see just a little more and at the same time keep the setting dark. See my previous game I made a while back with the same Idea. (you might need to scroll down a bit)
http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=122884&b=25
Just an Idea, you will need to play around with the settings to get it just right.
I do like how you got the Tree set on fire in picture two, just why would that be the only thing flaming. I would suggest Rethinking the Idea of the Entities Layouts. Kinda Put the Idea "Why would this be here, would this realisticly be here if this was realy life"
Just another Tip that helps me make maps look a notch up from FPSC.
I am not trying to slam your game, just trying to give you helpfull tips on how to make it even better then what you have. Cause you can never have to much "better".
What you have is a fantastic start, the story is good and the layout looks decent.
Just add the above to the game and it will go from decent to GREAT!
PAIN!
Me = noob
and i love The TGC : )