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2D All the way! / Beginning with Vector Art

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Travis Gatlin
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Posted: 21st Nov 2012 23:24 Edited at: 21st Nov 2012 23:25
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Hi 2D Chat board. I've never posted here before. At least I don't think I have. But I'm here to show some of you guys some of my first vector drawings. I've been trying to get into it lately and I personally think I'm doing fairly well. What do you guys think? "All constructive criticism is welcome, and encouraged.)

Assassin Character (2nd design, WIP, too big of an image to embed)
http://imm.io/MtBC

Car (Forgot the name of it. My first design)


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You can find my latest work here. Please comment on my work and tell me what you think!

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Phaelax
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Posted: 25th Nov 2012 06:29 Edited at: 25th Nov 2012 06:30
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Might want to outline the mirror. And are the doors suppose to be a darker shade than the rest of the car?

Oh yea, and other than that it looks pretty good.

"You're not going crazy. You're going sane in a crazy world!" ~Tick
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Travis Gatlin
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Posted: 26th Nov 2012 00:11
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Thanks for the comment. It's really old so I lost the file. I suppose I didn't notice the darker shade of grey at first.
What did you think of the Assassin?

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Phaelax
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Posted: 26th Nov 2012 08:00
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Not bad. Feet could use a little work. The strap over the chest (from the left) appears to float near the belt. And I think the handle on the sword might be crooked.

If he falls and curls up in a fetal position, he's gonna get stabbed a lot by himself!

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Travis Gatlin
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Posted: 29th Nov 2012 01:50
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I see what all you mean. Well, thanks for the comments! They're much appreciated!

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