It looks rather melancholic. Style and tone of the game make it seem like someone very lonely made it. Maybe thats on purpose.
The style seems to be okay, but I'd agree that a little more ...prowess in art and animation might have made it more interesting.
The gameplay however looks like point and click adventure on its minimum. The bleak backgrounddesign is not very capturing either.
You say that the story is very good. If so, I hope the creator finds some joy in writing. He might reach a better audience as this is pretty hard to get behind. Narration and design are the first impression and hard to overcome.
Quote: "As for the voice I honestly think that if they want the game to be taken seriously in English speaking countries they have to get someone who speaks English, I'd take it more seriously if it were subtitled."
While making due with what you have is part of the indie-stick, contacting other indies with different talents and interests to collaborate on a project is too. I would have advised him to contact hobby-voiceactors. I dont mind substandart voiceacting in general, only if its in a storydriven/serious game.
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So, that's the Story of Indie Game, with $0 budget, no dev skills and happy end as it was released by a major publisher. I hope you all will be inspired!"
Thats great! I hope the creator remains on a creative path.
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Most indie titles i've seen has had decent to good to great drawn stuff
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I agree. I've seen some really good artwork in the indiescene lately.
Quote: "Also, to be fair, this "badly drawn" game was finished and published on discs. How many local games did that?"
Quite a few actually.
In conclusion: I think its okay, I am just the wrong person to enjoy it as I dislike most aspects of it. Maybe the story is great, maybe its just something in it that really resonates with Mr.Handy that I wouldnt get but from my perspective its one of the lesser indie adventures I've seen.
I think that this is one of the examples where a single person, gifted in music and perhaps writing has done everything, including the aspects he was less capable of. Like drawing.
-Wolf