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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Moonlight Hill

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Diego
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Hey Guys,
This is my first game (finally )

Storyline-Moonlight Hill
- There's a quite little town in the middle of desert called Moonlight Hill, but in the middle of the night people dissapar. You play as Ruben Alcocer, a Photographer that wants to find out whats going on...

Please comment on the storyline
ScreenShot will be posted later

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First Picutre of the Hills

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ahh forgot jpeg

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Pretty nice storyline and screenshot.

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Diego, why do we play your brother?

Ruben Alcocer
Diego Alcocer

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Origin says i'm l33t

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Posted: 14th Mar 2006 10:50
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nice hills

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i got those hills, they're good but annoying to join up
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Dark_ITheI _Angel
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I like the sky,its beautiful!
the terrain is not bad but isnt your game not too jung to show?
Try to end a part,like a town(for sure there will be one) and when its finish the way you want it then show it and for sure you will get better critics.
About the storyline: i like it!,sounds like the storys of those nice snes rpg games that i liked and still like games.
but if the people just disapear in the middle of night and you just walk with a camera..well..would it not be a little bit too boring?
try adding more details to the story like:people disapears and strange creatures came and soo on,our player will have to fight his way trough monters and undefined creatures to find the true and how many levels will there be,how will the game looks like wich featus you are planning to integrate etc etc.
its just too little what you give to comment.

The goal is not to make something and ask for comments but to end something AND THEN ask for comments

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Posted: 14th Mar 2006 18:59 Edited at: 14th Mar 2006 19:03
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dark_itheI_angel do you even own fpscreator?

nice screenshot
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I dont think he/it has crow. Looks to be a moaner and bitcher.
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Dark_ITheI _Angel
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Posted: 14th Mar 2006 21:45 Edited at: 14th Mar 2006 21:49
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@crow,
for comments i do not need too own the app,and i dont like the app anyway but i do own DB-classic.

@Higgins,
Am a modeler who specialized himself in the level-making area.

Btw,it gets at my balls that you kids make an sphere and feel like you have to show it and call it a game.

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Quote: "Diego, why do we play your brother?

Ruben Alcocer
Diego Alcocer"

No your playing as my grandpa he was a photographer for WWII

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It is not a made up storyline it is true...there was a town named Moonlight Hill during WWII and my grandpa went there to check it out.

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Quote: "Btw,it gets at my balls that you kids make an sphere and feel like you have to show it and call it a game.
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kids thats funny

my nine year old nephew has got more manners than you

higgins yer right man a moaner and bitcher another 1 to put up with

at least a sphere is the right shape for your balls

by the way diego nice screenies you keep up the good work dude
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No time for morons.
and if you would use your brain a little bit more you would know that i dont call somebody in speacial a kid,not even you although you sound like those teens on yahoo messenger or maybe worse.
btw,idio(ts) never understand were the point is, hell, they cant even found it

Quote: "higgins yer right man a moaner and bitcher another 1 to put up with"

This is not a war you moron.

Quote: "by the way diego nice screenies you keep up the good work dude "

Thats the best comment i´ve seen on the whole www .

@diego,
Some standing grass sprites would give that scene the needed crisp.
some blurred like in gta san andreas
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least thats 1 moaner and bitcher we will see the last off
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If my account is locked for telling someone the true,well,let it be!
Have a nice day mr. cool

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Posted: 14th Mar 2006 23:28 Edited at: 14th Mar 2006 23:29
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Quote: "The goal is not to make something and ask for comments but to end something AND THEN ask for comments"


I've noticed your posts on many threads (and whilst possibly well intentioned) they have a habit of coming across negative.

With regards to the quoted comment, trust me this isn't how design or development works, if people can't be free to bounce ideas off of one another then what is the point? It's easier to identify and solve problems early on than it is later down the line.

@ Diego - Nice storyline and pic, it sets the overall ambience well.

Good luck and looking forward to seeing more.

Cheers, Rich.
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First of all,sorry for getting off-topic.

@Opus Games,
I do understand what you mean.
Let me add that (most)everyone using FPSC is a Solo developer,so the best way would be lets say,finish a room the way you want it to be and then ask for comments,that way every new idea can be compared with the old cause in this case,its your idea that counts, all other things are just this little things that would make it looks better (if).
Like the hill,looks finished but with grass sprites would looks better imo.

Quote: "I've noticed your posts on many threads (and whilst possibly well intentioned) they have a habit of coming across negative."
I agree,to a certain point,when defining what do you call negative.
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The way I see it is that FPSC attracts a wide range of people of all ages and I will always take the default stance of applauding effort where I see it regardless of the end result.

Game concepts are rarely anything more than a one page synopsis and it is often this that determines whether a project will progress, artwork of any nature is often a few steps down the line. Diego has provided us with a brief outline of what he is trying to accomplish accompanied by a screenshot (however limited) that helps to set the scene.

Admittedly it is hard to offer constructive criticism on what is shown but what we can do (if interested in what he is showing) is to offer motivation for him to continue.

If I was many years younger, then I too would probably be showing off my early work in the hope of getting some positive reaction. I feel this enthusiasm should be fostered.

In terms of negativity not all of your posts seem to offer a balance of problems & solutions (if I'm wrong then I'll gladly retract that statement) it's just the overall sense I've got from reading your posts.

The (professional) industry is full of cynicism and it can be somewhat demoralising. Criticism is always easy to give and hard to take, and I guess that is the root of what I'm trying to say.

Cheers, Rich.
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I changed the texture of the hill to grass so it looks better

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And..I do completly understandstand your point.
I must agree that also i was like that in my beginning stages and just beeing hard isnt the good way,in fact,when i think back i can almost feel that enthusiasm back in those times and how i wanted to show every single thing i made,because it was made by me!
Yes,I do agree this should be supported and also that my way wasnt/isnt the best way although it was not my goal to put someones work down.

Thanks for..ya know what i mean!
cya around

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Man if you guys are going to fight send ims don't post here lol

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Picture 3
-a picture of the house you live in !NOT FINISHED!

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seems nice! is it a horror game or something rpg or investagation? or adventure

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Pic 03: I like it. Wouldnt it be better to make some pictures hanging on the wall. maybe of some general!
and a desc with some of this old phones and documents laying on it.


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Quote: "!NOT FINISHED!"


Try reading.
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Higgins,i know its not finished even if he wouldnt have said it.
I was just trying to give some tips on how he could fill that room.
And please,Dont became the second Crow,I hope you are smarter!
cya

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did some one say my name my ears are burning
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please stop going off topic. this post is for people who have comments on the screenshots, so frankly whoever is having a bitch fit please go away or come back when you have cooled down. im sure diego would get pissed off at this.

anyways... thats a nice village youve got there diego. try and make most of the houses unique, because most people just copy and paste. if you have 3d world studio maybe you could design the houses from that.

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Good storyline, good screenies! Keep it up!
What happened with your grandad and the village? Why were people disappearing???

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I really find this weird that this get's reconition and its not new, just like my stuff it's boring and plain, the skybox he got from stock, the hills arent his and the house looks weird, it's to broght for the type of game your trying to pull off, WW2 games are not bright, they have dark textures and lighting in limited areas, I know that the house isn't done but its way to bright... nobody but a few people here have an idea that will make it, I bet you'll look at the overall product and go "i've could've done better" and scrap it and nobody will remember it... what im trying to say is that you'er going the wrong way for the project your doing, try playing the types of games that are in the field in which your game is in and study it, get the basic gameplay mech. down and lvl layout and you'll do fine, but this is all weird and it doen't look good to me but maybe you'll show me wrong : )

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Quote: "seems nice! is it a horror game or something rpg or investagation? or adventure "

more like adventure-horror

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Quote: "Good storyline, good screenies! Keep it up!
What happened with your grandad and the village? Why were people disappearing???"


My grandpa is fine he's just a little mental from the whole thing...
The village got burnt down...
The disappering people...well I don't want to ruin the story lol

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New sig
any comments


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what kind of monsters are in there? it has a good titel!

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nice work! can you PM me the rest? im sooooooo interested!

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Am i the only one that stays up so late on TGC fourms? ooops i forgot you guy's have school :p

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Is this a true story? I doubt theres monsters if it is Lizzbizz!

EDIT: Unless it was a town with actiive paranormal activity? Erm...sorry...I'm being wierd again

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hmm we have to see a pic cause seeing is beliveing! well i like my story to my horror game every one else do to well im just tweaking up the storys now and make it mean scence to what happend oh yhea i forgot there is a new character named Elizabeth Garcia a nurse at magnus hospital and you play her for 2 scenarios!!! so cool anyways umm yhea lets see a pic oh yhea if you guy want to know more just tell me "the nurse personality and impresions are simular to lisa garland" well not exacly but you know what i mean

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Whoa! A really quick reply!

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Yhea in a blink of a eye

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I'll be keeping my eye on this game though...Lizzbizz, have you started developing Lucid Nightmare yet?

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nope not yet but dont worry its worth it ok

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So hows the project going deigo? Any little leakages of information about the storyline?

Edit:BUMP

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Diego,
Can you please e-mail me telling me what happened to the people-PLEASE?! I really want to know hehe
tkingston@hotmail.co.uk

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Gamzs since your so in to lucid nightmare ill give you the first updates and some cheats

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Sorry for not posting in a while. I went to go see mexico beat usa at baseball (mexico won ) and I'm also sick today (w00t I don't get to go to school!!!). I'm pretty pissed off that ppl are going off topic and I'll be posting the demo and screenies later...


P.S. I WON"T TELL ANYONE WHAT HAPPEN TO THE PPL


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New picture (kinda pointless but funny!)


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Damn! That girl to the right, oops i mean the girl to the left is good looking!
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