I would like to put what my opinions are to improve this movie to make it semm buyable as a game.
please dont take anything i say offensive I dont want ot start on the rong foot.
1: Dont do a close up on the character
2: try what some other people did and use the game THE MOVIES to make a movie for it.
3: Change the music I know it may seem like it matches and is cool but the band your playing isnt the most popular and liked by alot plus voices in a song in a game ? are kinda unheard of.
4: Use screenshots that show alot of action in the game and maybe record youself playing the game.
Other than that the movie looked really good, but try not to file it into winrar rather just use windows movie maker and uploade the saved file to fsphost.com and link to the file from there to here.
MayNeed to Grimsom things up a lil