Jonathon...
Well, at least $1.95 is more reasonable. Nonetheless, is this your first complete FPSC game? If so, I
strongly recommend keeping it freeware. However, that is your choice.
That said, even at $1.95 (or $0.01, for that matter), you seriously have to consider presentation of your website. As such, I highly recommend making your site much more... well, inviting.
Use a spell checker, first of all. I don't want to sound harsh, but this is a
must if you expect anybody to make any type of investment in your software (in this case, FPSC game). All you need is Microsoft Word--most of the time, your wording will be guessed by Word and all you need to do is read the suggestions. If it doesn't have any, look it up in the dictionary. You're bound to find it. Just remember that grammar is a
must--I'm sure you don't write like this at school (if you're in school - would you type like that on your resumé?), so take the extra time to write correctly.
Secondly, invest in, at the very least, a domain. It doesn't even need to be hosted seperately--just have it forward your visitors to your Freewebs address. Make your website as memorable as possible--make interesting use of your space. And at the very least, give a
detailed description of the game. If you look at my website, you'll see that I used things like fake newspaper clippingsto tell the story in an interesting manner. Use some interesting things like that if you
really want to get some attention drawn.
Next, get screenshots. Take as many as you can, all of your best places. You want people to give you their hard earned money to play this game--they should have a reason to.
There's more that you'd need to sell a game with better results, but that's means for a start.
Evil has a new name. Demo out now!