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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Mariens Fireteam Bravo Alpha Charlie

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butyouman
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Posted: 13th Oct 2006 22:57 Edited at: 14th Oct 2006 05:32
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Hi i started a new game it is the begining to the game mariens as you can see on my sig i would like to give a special thx to:


Stamina for his pack {its free and i suggjest it}
Gps for his p90



ok well here it is the story changed.
You are Mattew Halkons the loader of the sk941 swat team you goal it to interigate and elimenate terrorist threats.



Well that about it i no the story was bad but check out this screeny its of lvl 2 and it rules.

I like cereal

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Butter fingers
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Posted: 13th Oct 2006 23:59
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you know. The screen looks really good. You need to add some details before it'll rock. Perhaps some old war posters stuck onto the building, and barrels and stuff outside (so the player has something to hide behind when the fit hits the shan.
But nice use of the freebies, it looks really good.

The story tho...

Dude the story is what is going to draw the player to play your game. The least you could do is run it through a spell checker!

Quote: "interigate and elimenate"


I know I re-edited cheesy's story for him and you really liked it, but you gotta put sme effort in first. the story of your game is like 1 line long!

butters

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Jon Fletcher
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Quote: "And the person who made the p90 i think it was opposing forces"


Actually, Graham, AKA 'GPS'

nice screenshot


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FredP
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Posted: 14th Oct 2006 00:34 Edited at: 14th Oct 2006 00:35
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Quote: "when the fit hits the shan."


Good stuff.Way too funny.
Seems to be a nice start...the name of your game may be a bit long.
Work on the story.Believe me,I know that writing the story for your game can be a pain in the...neck.
Every first person shooter has to have crates and barrels in it...
I think it's the law...but you want to give yourself some kind of cover.

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butyouman
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Well thx guys i am working on the lvl now i will post a screny of the 1st lvl tomorrow the first lvl is a casion and you have hostiges and enimeses it cool

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Butter fingers
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Quote: "the first lvl is a casion and you have hostiges and enimeses it cool"


what the?

*CASINO

*HOSTAGES

*ENEMIES

Dude, I know it's only spelling, but you're presenting yourself like a six year old.

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SpyDaniel
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Or hes dyslexic, like I am, but not as bad as I was when I was 4, actually, I hardly get any thing wrong, unless Ive never spelled the word before and havent learned it... crappy schools.

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butyouman
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O well i am not dyslexic i just type so fast i just i dont read over and just post it sorry.





BTW-The above sentence is good spelling but it took me 1 min to do.

More screenys soon

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butyouman
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Ok look at this i updated the screenys they r from lvl 1 tell me what u think.

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Zeppelin 37BDF
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What is a Marien? Is it some kind of alien? But seriously, it marine is spelt *M*A*R*I*N*E* not marien. Your sig spells it right, but everything else doesn't.

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SpyDaniel
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lol

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butyouman
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Posted: 14th Oct 2006 19:25 Edited at: 14th Oct 2006 19:37
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Piz comment on the screeny
I like this one of lvl 3

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Zeppelin 37BDF
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Sure you got enough tables stacked up in that screenshot?

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KeithC
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I'm not really a fan of the floor and ceiling being the same texture. Not bad so far though.


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there is a ceiling seg you know. Why don't you use it? Other than that it's looking OK. But if you want anyone to take you seriously, you have to work on your spelling.

You don't have to be insane to answer my questions, but it helps

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butyouman
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Thx guys i will try to work on my spelling

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Zeppelin 37BDF
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spelling also includes using words like thx, no (as in know), Plz, R,

Does is really take that much time to spell out the whole word?

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butyouman
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Sorry i used to play runescape and that how i talked.

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Mr Kohlenstoff
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Back to topic again.
Looks interesting.
If you were able to sort this tables ingame, it would be a cool feature... but I don't think, that it's possible.

Visit the DBPro - Speed up your game-Thread. http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=88661&b=1
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sigh dyslexia I to am cursed with it if you look at all my early posts there gibberish then I got wise I now have microsoft words spell checker on in the back ground when ever I brose the internet.
Oh and the game look nice

The world is complicated only people are simple
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butyouman
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Thx all i will try to post more later because i am getting my report card back on friday and 4 of my tachers told me i am failing so i am grounded i no that.

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Zeppelin 37BDF
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I have never heard of a kid who knows how to make video games, but fails almost all of his subjects.

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Quote: "when ever I brose the internet"


Oh I can totally tell that it is working.

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butyouman
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On topic

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butyouman
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Ok so what do u think i got my repot card back adn i got all b and 1 f in computers ok so back on toppic u liek it or not.

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Im glad your using light mapping to some extent but it needs improvement.Instead of using 1 ranged light use a few ranged lights with diffrent values.Lights do not fall from the sky it needs a source.
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Jonno
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Call it Bravo Two Zero then get killed by Andy McNab.

Looks nice..except the weapons need hands

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butyouman
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Thx guys i got grounded for a week but im back.

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Darth Vad3r
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What the hell kind-of title is "Mariens Fireteam Bravo Alpha Charlie?" How many fireteams do you have in this game? Here are my suggestions:
- Marines: Fireteam Bravo
- Marines: Fireteam Alpha
- Marines: Fireteam Charlie
- Marines
- Marines: Fireteams
- Marines: Bravo
- Marines: Alpha
- Marines: Charlie

The game is looking alright, but right now, I think you need to work on your grammar and spelling.

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butyouman
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Well thx it is nice to get some ideas and i will try to work on my spelling.

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Jonno
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LOL...1.Come up with a good name...in english.
2.Make game...in english.
3.Post...in english.

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