ok i tested it, i told you what i think but ill just post it here as well in-case you forget
-Lower ambience level and add more lights for a darker effect
-get a better bot script
-fix voice levels in the Cut scenes
-make the Cut scenes videos fluent, not pictures
-when you get to this room and look out the window, use can see the bottom of the skybox, so it looks like you are floating (see pic added)
-add more levels in the final game because i finished it in about 7min
-after you talk to the SWAT guy in the 2nd level in that room, from then on it laggs at about 15-17fps until you get out of the room the to boxes and generator
thats all i can think of for now
-its a bit easy, i didnt die the first time i played it
ill add the pic as soon as i take a screnny
-im not sure if the cut scenes said stuff about the story, but i didnt notice and sign of a story line in those 2 levels
-the fax machines say "put your text here"
-on the add-on huds (like the fax machine one) u need to improve it because the colour isnt very good and you should make it look like the rest of the huds (like press enter to open door and such)
EDIT: Pic added
Mods, its 500x100, so you cant tell me its bigger than 600x120
