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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / screenies of an unnamed horrorgame

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Jhon
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hi there
i have some screenies of the firts level of my horrorgame without a name and without a story...

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and the second one

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third

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fourth

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fifth

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Jhon
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please commend my pics

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Posted: 12th Mar 2007 17:16
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What are these pictures of, and what kind of comments were you after? I know you didn't make the hands and weapons.

Best.

I'm sorry, my answers are limited. You must ask the right question.

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The first one looks cool whit the green light the second,third and fouth I did not saw so much. And the fifth one cool segs and I like the baseball batl.

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Posted: 12th Mar 2007 19:47
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Jhon,

Greetings. Model Pack #4 certainly is a good addition. Good choice for the purchase.

Your screenies are...well...boring and tedious to the eye. The lighting is poor, and the composition of the scenes is weak.

Without a title, or storyline for your project, it's nearly impossible for the viewer to get excited about seeing very average looking screenshots, that everyone on these boards has seen hundreds of times before. A picture is worth a thousand words, but your screenshots say nothing.

Keep practicing with compositions, and the use of lighting. Your screenshots and the game itself will improve, all in good time.

I look forward to watching the evolution of your project...whatever that might be. Pick a storyline and a name. The rest will fall into place...

Thanks,

Seth Black

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Posted: 12th Mar 2007 21:33
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Use lightmapping. That's my advice.

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Jhon
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Posted: 12th Mar 2007 22:44
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yes its just an early version of the game and i havent finished this level you´ve seen yet. i actually wasnt sure if i shall post the screenies. thanks foryour tips. i will add the story and title (hopefully)soon.

p.s. some screenies are really very dark...
i´ll improve the lightmapping

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Posted: 13th Mar 2007 18:38
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here is a better version of screenie nr 2

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Posted: 13th Mar 2007 18:40
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and of nr 3

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and nr 4

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the knife and the hands look like the ut2004 mod killing floor.

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It is 2 dark 4 me

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Jhon
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Posted: 16th Mar 2007 18:12
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sorry

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yes me to... way to dark... I do like the first one... Add some red where it is pitch black and they may look creepy.... Any need more entities to make the rooms less boring.... Good Start!

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ok

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Inspire
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Posted: 17th Mar 2007 22:11
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Too dark...needs more lightmapping....there is a table on the ceiling (I think that was intentional).

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1. @ Inspire: yes the table is intentional. Do you like it?
2. I have an idea for a story: You are a guy who works for an advertisement agency (?... I don´t know if this is called so in English ) and you are just at the railway station to go to work. You are waiting and when the train comes you suddenly stand in front of it and you die. After a while (you think it was just a while) you wake up in a dark creepy "version" of the station and you don´t know what happened...
3. Please ggive me hints if my story is good or not

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Posted: 18th Mar 2007 13:32
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Don´t look at THIS post here... i just wanna try something.
blablabla

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ok that wasn´t the thing i wanted to try...
Can anyone please tell me how i can make one of these "code snippet" things please?

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Does anyone know if i can post an mp3 file?
If yes, i could show you the "soundtrack" of the game.

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oh sh_t! i just read the rulez that you can´t post stories...
So a question @ a moderator: please tell me where i can post my story. Then I´ll make a new post there.

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I also read the rules that you can post music.
But when i try to post my soundtrack the browser dies
But I can show some nice (i hope) screenies with improved lightmapping... But it should not become too light because it must be frightening at all.

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first

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Posted: 18th Mar 2007 14:29 Edited at: 18th Mar 2007 14:29
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second

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the third one

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fourth one (What do you think about this mysterious "sky"?

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fifth one

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and the last one (this isnt really improved lightmapping, it´s just a splashed human )

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add more lightmapping. PITCH BLACK IS NOT SCARY. Change your ambience to 0,0,0, so it's pitch black by default, then add lightmapping.

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OK but what about the sky?

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Also @ AaronG (and all the other guys): It´s not so darkas it looks like on the screenies. Inside the station you can use a torch which is light enough to see everything and outside there´s daylight

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Posted: 18th Mar 2007 16:11 Edited at: 19th Mar 2007 09:11
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You can download the level now from http://hosted.filefront.com/Jhon126
it is called "secondsight.rar"

(There is also the soundtrack in there)

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I have no idea why i called the game "Second Sight"

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There is already a game called that.

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try something like this

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um...no.

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Ok (@ Iinspire) I thought as much... Do you have another idea hhow to call it?
@Xsnip3rX: What do you mean? Actually I dont want to use these old segments.

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i don't know where you could post mp3s but so far it looks cool

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THX shadow
Did U download the level from my filefront link?

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Why iz nobody answering?

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Don't expect this fanatical following of your game. By what I can see, there is no custom media (besides the menu). I have seen games using the model packs many a time, and it always is boring to me because I've seen it all before. That's my input.

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Posted: 26th Mar 2007 17:39 Edited at: 26th Mar 2007 17:41
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Yeah... Ok.
I am doing the second level by now if anyone is interested...

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Too dark you cannot see a thing. For light mapping instead of making a whole room full of light change the distance it can reach to 100 and place lots around the place, it looks more natural. Also where you add light put "lights" as light doesnt just come out of nowere!

(srry if i sound like a pillock, still learning!)
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xsnip3rx idea was too "RED" i do not like red lights 2 much but they are ok

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Thx for hints... I can make a demo or some pics of the seond level but for now im in holidays for a week...
P.S. The game isnt as dark as it looks like on the screenies.

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3rd is too dark

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