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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Project 247

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darimc
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This is an action game i am making. It was formally called: Agent John Smith.

You are a secret agent named John Smith. Your mission is to break into an enemy research facility and destroy Project 247. You think Project 247 is a file on a floppy disc. You thought wrong. You are soon sprung into a battle between the terrorists and... John Smith.

This was going to use version 1.05 but the lightmapping in version 1.04 is soooo tasty.

screenie one attached.

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darimc
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screenie 2

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darimc
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screenie 3

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Zdrok
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Posted: 8th Apr 2007 04:18 Edited at: 8th Apr 2007 04:19
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Eeeeh...show more. Could use some lightmaps, and.....the computer's keyboard is backwards!

EDIT: That comment was for screen #1. The rest look OK.

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darimc
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screenie 4

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darimc
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screenie 5

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AaronG
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eh, looking OK, I guess...

Capitalize the first letter of the first word of each sentence, too dude. (The HUDS in game, I mean.)


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The segment and entity use is very bland and boring. You need to add them more realistically.

The story images are really bad. Try getting GIMP and making some neater, non-paint-bucket work.

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Opposing force
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Why PNG? They take ages to load. Why couldn't you of posted the screens in JPEG format?

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darimc
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Because jpg has AWFUL quality.
Quote: "Why PNG? They take ages to load. Why couldn't you of posted the screens in JPEG format?"


The segments are place very realistically. So don't make comments like that. Because everyone knows that you just want to fill up room on your comment.
Quote: "The segment and entity use is very bland and boring. You need to add them more realistically."


I enjoy the HUD images, they are purposely like that.
Quote: "The story images are really bad. Try getting GIMP and making some neater, non-paint-bucket work."


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Opposing force
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Quote: "Because jpg has AWFUL quality."


That's only MS paint' JPGs.

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Cheese Cake
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I have to agree that the huds dont look that good.

But about the segments. Well
they look good but you make to large rooms...
Like the toilets normally they dont have space between them.
And well the room is too BIG...

I think you need to adjust the ambient lighting a little...

If you make those large rooms put more entities in it..
It would look much better...

But i think it is better to make the rooms a little smaller.

I hope i helped.
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darimc
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@cheesecake, Yes you helped. That was very good advice. I know from these screenies it looks like there is not many entities but in the game there is a lot of them. I will post a vid soon.

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Butt monkey
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Quote: "The segments are place very realistically. So don't make comments like that. Because everyone knows that you just want to fill up room on your comment."


Quote: "I enjoy the HUD images, they are purposely like that."



Hey, if you don't want people opinions then don't post your game here. It's only constructive criticism.

And I also agree. The huds look pretty yucky. Red and grey don't work well together and your images need some work.

The bathroom is good but it's far too big. If you want to have big rooms make sure you can fill them.

Meh...
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Quote: "Because jpg has AWFUL quality"

For FPSC screenies the quality difference is not noticable.
You are allowed to post .png images here but if your images are too big (like 1 MB for example) don't expect a bunch of people to look at them.
People are giving you their honest opinion.If you don't want it then don't post a thread here.

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darimc
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ok, I will use gimp .jpg

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Drapes#10
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Awesome darimc can u make a demo Love the light maps! [ic.zip]

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Shadow heart
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looks nice, but I would consider changing the text to white or something a little easier to read. Looks nice, add a few more entites and stuff to spice it up

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darimc
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@Drapes #10, I will make a demo.

@Shadow heart, I'm afraid I like the text like that, so it will stay that way, but thanks for the comment.

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