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Father Tree
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Posted: 30th May 2007 01:08 Edited at: 30th May 2007 01:09
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Hey, I've finally decided to stick with my game this time , as the title says the game is called Psychology and this is the basic story line i will improve on it later. Anywhoo on with the storyline!

[Storyline]

Message Received 10th January 2007

My name doesn’t matter. My life has gone from good to bad and from bad to worse. It all started back in High School, I was sort of a boffin, and I tried my hardest to get good grades. Everyone started making fun of me, calling me horrible names I cannot bear to say. This made me angry, I started trying to hold in my anger, but they continued to bully me, I asked and asked until one day it let loose, a lad in the year above me the same age but in year 10, smacked me across my head and said “Hey Boffin! Do my homework for me!” This made me so angry I just lost control, I ran up to him and pulled him to the ground, I grabbed the nearest object and started smacking him with it, he kept screaming “ Get off me, get off me!!” but I didn’t stop until I got pulled off by these older lads. The Victim/Bully had a bloody nose and battered up face. After that I got suspended from school form 5 weeks, got put in a boarding school and had to stay there until I got calmer and suppressed my anger. I had to take lessons like how to suppress my anger and how to control it. These Lessons learnt me good. By the time that it was over 8 weeks later I was a new man. I started to continue with my studies until I met College. As I walked past people that knew me from school I heard them whispering “Hey look it’s that psycho that beat up Jack Travis.” This became annoying, but I got used to it. I continued on with my life. I got a job as a teacher. I taught students how to suppress their anger in the lesson Personal Development. My life was going good; I had a house, job and had my eyes on a girl. But then she broke my heart, I asked her out to a date and she said these exact words “Oh my god! Who would want to go out with you?” This triggered a sensor in the back of my mind, the past trauma came back to my mind, the bully the names and all of that bad crap that happened to me. I started to plan out my killing and this will happen on the 12th February.

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Hey Carol I received that yesterday. I think this means a murder is going to happen…lets get to work

[/StoryLine]

Its going to be a like C.S.I/Thriller kind of game, here are some screens.




Comments Good/Bad are welcome

EDIT - As i said i think... these screens are not fully finished.

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Satchmo
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Looks good, keep it up.

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The screenshot looks really bright and bland. Color things up a bit more, add more entities, and lower the ambience.

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Father Tree
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Posted: 30th May 2007 02:03 Edited at: 30th May 2007 02:04
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as i said its not finished at the moment but thanks.

EDIT - And for some reason its more bright in test game than in the actuall game i don't know why though.

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sounds like a good game I like the story pretty original. About the screenshot it seems a bit empty add more entities
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This story is great, I can't wait to see it come along!

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The story rocks.

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Posted: 30th May 2007 18:06
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nice to so a plot line that’s a little different best of luck

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Posted: 30th May 2007 21:05
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would you think it would be a good idea for each level say, the crime lab gets sent another tape for you to listen to, and that tells you where to investigate. Yes or No?

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Posted: 30th May 2007 21:19
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looking cool. that idea sounds interesting.
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Posted: 31st May 2007 00:00 Edited at: 31st May 2007 00:00
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Nice story.
Looking forward to see more.

A question.
This game will it be based on only this crime.
Or will there be more criminals?
(Sort of missions when you complete 1 you'll get another message about a other criminal who is trying to put up a massacre)
In my opinion i think its better to stick with 1.

And from the letter there is only 1 criminal so would this game be more of a puzzle type of game?
Or did Boffin hired sort of assasins or such?
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Posted: 31st May 2007 00:07 Edited at: 31st May 2007 00:10
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ooook! Thanks for all the comments people.

Cheese Cake
well i think it would be better to stick with one criminal, but i will try and retexture some of the characters to act like druged up fools and try to kill you, it might be more puzzle based game, rather than a run and gun type.

Thanks More Comments are welcome thanks
new Scrrens on the way hopefully!

EDIT - OOOH! I have had another idea, like your idea cheese cake, and i thought that "he who shall not be named" () shall like urm hire criminals to make massacres to distract the Crime Lab and i think you could switch Points of Vies say like, One level your the crime lab and the next your the Criminal.

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Nice idea.
And at the end that the story combines.
That the criminal would meet the detective.

Anyway this game sounds good would like to see more.

And its best to only stick with Boffin and hired criminals.
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The story is nice....... gets me thinking about how unfair life can be .

E.D.

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Me too

Anyway! Have any of you seen Prison Break?
Well if you have then you know Agent Mahonee,the F.B.I Guy,he takes pills to relieve pain, even though he not meant to. Well i thought that i could make our C.S.I Guy to have to find Pills around the game and if he does'nt take them well ill make him not take them then he gets bad flashbacks and he thinks that everyone's bad and if he does'nt find them, then the people go and try to kill him, good idea, yes or no please rate

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story rocks

to the ones thats trapped inside of you, this is it!!
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Meeting Room


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Pretty nice but I'd add an overhead lightsource and lose the couches and add some strolling chairs.
Nice story. Kudos to Father Tree.

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Come on people 233 views and only 13 odd comments, it seems that people arent interested with this. Oh and thank you to the people who commented.

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I like it, looks promising, but I'd go with Rilejarom's advice and also increase the ambience just a tiny bit. Other than that, looks cool.

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Hey Guys!

I got some new screens, these we only really just a fog test but please could you give C+C to them?







Ta guys and gal's

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The meeting room has looks great, except it needs a source for that light, and the light on the wall doesnt really match the room, but on the whole it is looking good so far
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sorry for that i will have to change it. Its late here in england so good night forumers thanks for all the comments but the screenies are W.I.P's an i will replace them later on!

Good night

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bump, and wow man that looks great!

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Hm, the fog added some odd sense of improved realism, I like it. I can see you used some of the model comp stuff. Good work, looking forward to seeing more.

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Well looks fun.
But if it is in modernday i think it would be better if you lose the
high tech digital map or what it is (green big television).
(Its a great looking model)

And if that is the meeting room for the criminals i think it would be better if they had some papers with their plan on it and put it on the table instead of expansive computers.

Because he is hiring sort of assasins to kill people...
People that where his enemies...
And now to kill them all he is buying and hiring all kinds of stuff
that would be very expensive.(very)

So that means that he was very wealthy and probably could buy some cops to cover this or maybe aim higher.
Just for killing a few people that laughed at him.
Therefore it would be better to stick with old fashion paper and pen.
Or maybe a laptop, computer.

Unless he is aiming for a bigger target.(very big)


Anyway i am not saying that this game isnt good.
Because i think it is a great game with a great story.
A story that you cant find on these forums.
Hope to see more screenies and best of luck with this game!
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The new screenshots look really good, and the story is really great. I can't wait to play this.

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Thanks for all the comments Cheese Cake and Inspire, i think you missunder stood me for the meeting room Cheese Cake. That was meant to be the Meeting Room for the Crime Scene Investigators not the Criminals, unless i missunder stood you?

Anyway thanks for comments people i have finished the training level and i am actually starting the first level, C+C is welcome for the behind screens and new ones on the way .

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Some good use of stock media and lighting :/ the storyline looks good, will we be seeing any enemies or is it going to be a thriller/mystery game?
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Yes i am pretty sure there will be enemies, probably so retextured characters,in the form of drugies and phycos. And ofcourse there is going to the assasians and " Da Boffin"

Screenies Soon!

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Oh sorry i thought that the meeting room was for the criminals.
My bad.
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OMG the story rocks and the screenys are ok. One thing, I think the police station needs more light,
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Its fine Cheese cake
Anyway here is a small W.I.P of the gym, ill be adding more stuff into it later, but im going out now its a lovely day for once!

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Quote: "And its best to only stick with Boffin and hired criminals."
You know boffin is just a label like nerd or chav right? or did you nickname him that because his name is unkown
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yep i just nicknamed him that at the moment because i dont want you to know his name yet

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Update a roonie!
Well the first level is complete burt the second level is a W.I.P, not all the objects have been placed in the second level so please dont say put more objects in please, anyway here with da screenies!!









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Looks nice, but i say you need to work more on your lightmapping and less usage of the fog...but thats my 2 cents

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thanks bloodeath, but for some reason it looks different in the screens than in the actual game :S but ill take your advice into hand and use it!

Thanks again comments are welcome

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Well done mate. Some top notch screenies there. Lower the fog density though.


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This looks snazzy! I see your also using the beretta in your game, it's a really good freebie. Anyway, I like the improvement on the meeting room. I have one question though, where did you get those archways for the rooms, I have been looking all over the place for something like that.
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he probably made it himself.

cool looking stuff.

8/10

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using a different light color might help

question
will there be any other weapons besides that berreta?

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hey thanks for the comments!

there will be other weapons besides the berreta i dont know what ones yet.

To make the archways i used signs IV which is a great program made by twarsch (<--- sorry if i spelt it wrong )
an more updates coming soon!

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Im afraid to say forumers im losing insperation (sp?) on this project. If a few forumers want me to continue this then i might do that but im thinking of making a sci-fi/thriller/ type of game.

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If I had Gamespace FE and Weapon Creator, I would have made that Blaster weapon thing in the graphics library FPSC ready.

but I don't. sorry

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What? I dont really understand sorry.

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