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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / [LOCKED] WareHouse

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Robert F
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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 00:25 Edited at: 30th Aug 2007 19:52
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This my new game(i know i said i was done with fpsc but i only said that cause i kept having a light error everytime i installed 1.06). Well anyway yeah this is my new game called WareHouse and im just going to use the names from my last game so your name is Jack Moore and you've just got hired to work in the warehouse.(the last employee died of course)But even before you start you have this wierd feeling about the WareHouse ha ha ha ha ha

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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8

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Robert F
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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 00:27
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Screeny 2

Thats all i got so far, i know its not alot to comment about but im workin on more

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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 01:13
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Looking nice.
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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 02:31
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Amazing ... Just, you need more entities too make it look like a realistic enviromental place ... But its really good, (just need better screen shot's)

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Robert F
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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 02:47
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thanks everybody im working on more screenshots right now so expect more to come soon

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Robert F
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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 03:32 Edited at: 8th Aug 2007 03:38
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pic 3(theres kind of a problem in this one because the light rays are upside down-i will change that though)

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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 03:39
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pic 4(pretty much the same as pic 3 just a different view)

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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 05:57
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Is there a demo level i can play, for fun at least?

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Robert F
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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 16:41
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im making it right now so it should be out soon

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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 19:14
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got the first level done, kind of short mostly just to get the player use to the game. Im working on the second level right now, if you guys want a demo of the two levels i can put one togther(but only if you want, so leave a message in here if you want it

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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 22:13 Edited at: 8th Aug 2007 22:13
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looks OK

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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 22:20
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Hey, ill take the demo...And correct it for you...
Yeah, your games coming out a bit nice...
It actually looks wonderful...Just need some action..

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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 22:32
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one thing before i release the demo does anybody have any idea why when i build the game and play it goes much slower than when i just test it(i have them at the same settings)

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Posted: 9th Aug 2007 01:19 Edited at: 9th Aug 2007 01:20
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heres a small demo(I think this game sucks)

http://files.filefront.com//;8263076;;/

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Posted: 9th Aug 2007 01:46
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Sweet, ill try it out...
And ill leave feedback...

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REVIEW!
Okay heres the main things that need to be fixed..

1st and 2nd....level!
At the first corner where the mummy is, You should summon a boulder there when you get to the door around the corner(so that you cant go back.....And then when you open the door and get to that room (its a bit bare)
And near the ending level there should be a hole like boulders all aroundand a tiny hole you could fit through for the next level...In the next level you should have zombie instaed of robots more zombies...And thats it...Its reall good just a lil bare..
3rd level...NOT DONE YET??

BUGS!!!
Okay heres the bugs!!!

1.When i get too the room with the zombie docter, the light is aiming the opposite way from the window..

2.In the 2nd level where you open the door to the robot around the mirrior where the computers are..the computer towards the wall in gone and is half way throught it..

thats it....

But the levels needs to be bigger and more interesting, more puzzles keys switches, etc..

Overall-Good
7/10

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Posted: 9th Aug 2007 02:38
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Quote: "1.When i get too the room with the zombie docter, the light is aiming the opposite way from the window.."


I know i forgot to fix that.


Quote: "But the levels needs to be bigger and more interesting, more puzzles keys switches, etc.."


Thanks i will try to do that stuff in the levels to come and probably edit the ones right now, sorry i kind of rushed this demo out my fault

Thanks for the feedback it really helps

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Posted: 9th Aug 2007 02:46 Edited at: 9th Aug 2007 02:50
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Looks good, maybe a few more entities needs to be added but not much, the lighting gives it a good atmosphere, nice work. Just to let you know aswell, the right-hand side light in the second picture seems to be acting weird, you should redo it.

Off topic -

I don't even want to know how some of you people think, I couldn't live with any one of the two very strange signatures in this thread.



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Posted: 9th Aug 2007 02:53
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Quote: "I don't even want to know how some of you people think, I couldn't live with any one of the two very strange signatures in this thread."


ha ha me either

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Posted: 9th Aug 2007 03:09
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Hey try this game demo i made...It has some puzzles...

http://files.filefront.com/The+Nightmare+demo/;7904810;;/fileinfo.html

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I see you lost the signature



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hmm, that demo was, how to put it, not so great.
it neeeds:
music
some lighting
more than just endless corridors
realistic entity placement.
more ammo.
more than the 1 type of baddy.

but u got a start


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Robert F
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Posted: 9th Aug 2007 21:42 Edited at: 9th Aug 2007 21:45
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ok will try to put that stuff in, but its just a demo so i was not planning to put music in it, not home right now so i will work on it when i get back soon

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Posted: 9th Aug 2007 21:47
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It seems ok but the hud doesn't seem to fit very much. Try a different one which would be in more harmony with the level. That's my opinion

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Robert F
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Posted: 10th Aug 2007 01:29
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ok good thinking, again thank you everybody

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Robert F
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Posted: 10th Aug 2007 01:58
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ok im back at my house now so i should be able to get more done(Unless theres an error)

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Robert F
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Posted: 10th Aug 2007 03:35
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new screeny(kind of plain, but still working on it)

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New Screeny

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Posted: 10th Aug 2007 03:37
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it might take me awile to post more screens because i just have this feeling im rushing this game and thats not good so now im going to take my time

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Posted: 10th Aug 2007 03:39
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New pic of an elevator room

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All of your floors and ceilings are the same, which is generally a bad thing.

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Nice screens!
And like that weapon.
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Posted: 10th Aug 2007 13:45
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Good atmosphere and lighting effects, but too dark and why is there a computer that says "Flight Pattern" in a warehouse. good start, though.

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Posted: 10th Aug 2007 15:20
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Its looking good.

Didnt played the demo.

But from the look at the screenies its looking good.

Keep the screenies coming!
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Robert F
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Posted: 10th Aug 2007 18:46 Edited at: 10th Aug 2007 20:24
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Quote: "why is there a computer that says "Flight Pattern" in a warehouse"


ha ha Not really sure, i guess its not really a warehouse its an office or something

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Posted: 10th Aug 2007 20:24
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screeny

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Posted: 11th Aug 2007 00:21
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Your entity placement seems really random.

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I think you have some nice lighting effects going on. But why is their a bench inside? The warehouse should have stocking areas...so use a few shelves and place some enties on them add abit of relaism.
I havent played the demo, but it looks good so far. :
keep the screenies coming.

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Posted: 11th Aug 2007 07:22
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Quote: "The warehouse should have stocking areas...so use a few shelves and place some enties on them add abit of relaism. "



well like i said its not really a warehouse i guess its more like a lobby

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Posted: 14th Aug 2007 04:55
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new pic of the basement

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Robert F
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Posted: 14th Aug 2007 08:38
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kind of off topic but how do people put pictures in what they posted i only know how to attach it to the file.

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see the browse button below where you responded?


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Posted: 14th Aug 2007 17:34
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no i mean put a picture in the message so you dont have to download it or view it just pops up in the message say like in this thread

http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=108407&b=33

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Posted: 23rd Aug 2007 04:32 Edited at: 28th Aug 2007 23:24
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hey its coming out really good, sorry couldnt post sooner but its very well put, its cool and all but you need more reasons just to go in a bathroom, but im really looking forward to your release...

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Posted: 24th Aug 2007 04:50 Edited at: 24th Aug 2007 04:50
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Quote: "hey its coming out really good, sorry couldnt post sooner but its very well put, its cool and all but you need more reasons just to go in a bathroom, but im really looking forward to your release..."


like i said this is gonna be combined with my new game "Killer Observations"

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nice, sick dude, you need a demo...lol

im keeping on eye on this thread..

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Posted: 24th Aug 2007 17:02
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i will make a demo but it will take me awile because after today i will not be on until late on monday

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The screens are looking alright. For the media you're using it looks nice. I think the doctors should be retextured as foremen, because whether its a factory or a warehouse or an office of a lobby (I'm sure you'll make up your mind eventually), there is no reason for a scientist to be there.

My only other niggle would be the skeleton by the bench. I hate those skeletons. I mean, what are the chances that someone died in that building and had time to decompose to just a skeleton?

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Quote: "The screens are looking alright. For the media you're using it looks nice. I think the doctors should be retextured as foremen, because whether its a factory or a warehouse or an office of a lobby (I'm sure you'll make up your mind eventually), there is no reason for a scientist to be there"


I would but i dont know how to retexture, if someone can help me out a little i will( like what program to use and how to start)

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