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Torsten Sorensen
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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 08:44
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Hey, I just made my first full song using all real instruments! I put together a simple song, and I'd like some feedback. Thanks!


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NeX the Fairly Fast Ferret
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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 12:00
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Well, if you need some feedback, put the mic against the speaker.


Since the other one was scaring you guys so much...
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Grandma
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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 12:17
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^hardy harr harr

Don't listen to him Torsten, he's the local drunk here at TGC. Don't pay him any attention and he'll go away eventually when it's time for his meds.

For a first song, that wasn't bad. What annoyed me though was that the song played alot on the low frequencies. I like it when there are instruments that span across the frequency range. And perhaps the bass could be lowered a tiny bit.

Other than that i really don't know what to say, because i have no idea what i'm talking about.

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Alquerian
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Posted: 8th Aug 2007 17:39 Edited at: 8th Aug 2007 17:40
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Quote: "What annoyed me though was that the song played alot on the low frequencies. I like it when there are instruments that span across the frequency rang"


My thoughts exactly. Because of the monotony, the tune had no life. The distorted electric sounded good but it was too repetitive. The bass guitar seemed to jump in randomly in the middle and end. The bass seemed inconsistent, while the drums were too repetitive (drums can be repetitive and it works well in some tunes). It has potential, it is just rough.

Hope this helps.

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