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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Horror Shock

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Kochan
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Posted: 22nd Aug 2007 21:36
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My first game, genre is Horror/sci-fi. The plot is discreet for right now, but so far will contain six parts with four levels each.

Some early screenies from the first map. Not a whole lot of entities yet, or enemies. Critique please...

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Inspire
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Posted: 22nd Aug 2007 22:25
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jpeg?

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Cheese Cake
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Posted: 23rd Aug 2007 00:13 Edited at: 23rd Aug 2007 00:13
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Yeah it looks like an bmp.

Other then that i should change it to an jpg, it would
certainly look better.
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Kochan
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Sorry, heres another screenie...

This time JPEG

Theres a goof where the sign is... it's backwards. Ill fix that.

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Kochan
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Posted: 23rd Aug 2007 00:37
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And another Screenie...

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phil17
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I like this so far, but the second screenie the red lights are abit over done

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Posted: 23rd Aug 2007 05:06
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yeah , cut down on the red a little

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Posted: 23rd Aug 2007 05:10
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The map layout looks pretty good, but it is BLAND.

Buh-buh-bummm...

Put in some more entities to fill it up.(humor-on) Then we'll talk.(humor-off)


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Posted: 23rd Aug 2007 10:58
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This looks like a good one..

Coming Soon: Outbreak
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Posted: 23rd Aug 2007 12:44
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Yeah rooms are to empty try to fill them a bit up.
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Kochan
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Posted: 23rd Aug 2007 15:29
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Ok, thanks guys. Im almost done with the level, Ill post some new screenies.

New Screenshot: Part of a Science Lab, Not Finished

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Endless Fps Team
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Posted: 24th Aug 2007 03:50
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cool, but its a bit bland, but keep it up...i have coinfidence this will be a great game...

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Kochan
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Posted: 24th Aug 2007 06:22
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New Screenies, this time from an Urban area level where you start out in a warehouse.

Story: I want to stray from conventional stories... do something diffrent then "your a scientist/docter/soldier/guy who is caught up in a mystery surrouding zombies/curse/mysterious deaths/blah.

So the story...

Your a terrorist plotting an attack against a major city landmark. Your group has been in the country now for some time, and your plans have been running without a problem. Then one day that changes...

On the day of the attack, you head to your groups secret weapons compound. Upon arrival you find that the FBI is there, and that someone in your group set you up.

Things get worse...

You manage to escape, but now your a wanted man, and it wont be long before your caught. You manage to make it to the terrorist organizations other hideout which luckily has yet to be discovered by the FBI and CIA. Any other members of the group who were not part of the plan or managed to escape are here.

While at the hideout a chemical gas leaks into the air ducts, and everyone immediately starts to die. You manage to make it out in time, but now you need to find out who the mole is. Before things go from bad to worse.

^Very basic idea for story, in game clues will elaborate more. Plus an ending you will never expect.

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Posted: 24th Aug 2007 06:23
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Screenie # 2

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Kochan
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Posted: 24th Aug 2007 06:23
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Screenie numer dri!

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Mr Kohlenstoff
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Posted: 24th Aug 2007 17:35
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Very nice screenshots, even if the last three don't look so.. ~atmospheric like the first ones.

However, about your story: afaik the Main-Part of your storyline is the last one, this chemical substance which kills the terrorists, and the FBI-Part is just an introduction? (Correct me if I'm wrong.. I didn't find out what "mole" is because google doesn't know the word ) And.. why is the game called "Horror Shock" then?
Sorry if basically everything is clear and I just didn't get it.
Good luck with the game.

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Posted: 24th Aug 2007 19:44
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Lol, a mole is soemone who leaks info from a security force. You'll see why the game is called Horror shock, in fact the story above is just an intro. You start out during the attack.
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