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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Attack on mars

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General powell11
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Im working on a scifi game, it takes palce on mars, you are a new comer just coming in at the station after being droped of by the transport ship, and you get there in time for a big festival when all of the sudden, a scinctist got into radioactive fuel and turned on everyone as a carnivore, you have been drafted by the last defense for, the MADS (Mars Attack and Defense Squad) and you have to defend yourself, and otehrs, against the dangers of a scinetist gone wrong.
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General powell11
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new screen

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General powell11
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and another

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General powell11
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one more for now

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AlanC
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Posted: 27th Nov 2007 05:40
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Looking good!

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General powell11
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thanks!

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General powell11
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c mon 40 views and only 1 comment!

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that is usually what happens, it looks okay.



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Dr Parsnips
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yeah it looks ok, need some work tho, your entity placement is good, but inconcistent, you seem to have a lot of odd entitys around the place, also your level design isnt poor, but it isnt perfect. What i tend to do is play a game and look at how the level is structured, that way you can almost replicate them and it makes the game look 100 time better! keep it up!

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General powell11
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thanks, i did a lot of work on the lightiting and made it brighter as wll, and i worked on some of the entitiys, thanks for the tips!

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The lighting is good, and the light coming from the laptop looks cool.


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Troy Chambers
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Posted: 29th Nov 2007 03:49 Edited at: 29th Nov 2007 04:26
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Looks pretty good.

Keep it up.

EDIT: Where did u get that hud?

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General powell11
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NEW PICS, a shut down lab

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General powell11
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and a generator room!

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pease post and critisize or tell me what i need to work on,. what i did goog any suggegstions etc. and on this prjoect the framrate is actually good (refer to recent projects of fps=10)

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Here are my scores out of ten on the new pics.
lighting: 8.5 (almost perfect)
entity placement: 7 (good)
creepiness: 6.5 (above average)
Average of things above: 7.3 (good)
Hey, you got a good from me, keep it up.

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thanks darmic, that rea;;y means a lot, and i never knew my lighting was that good

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Yeah, the reason I think you lighting is really nice is because the shut down lab has beautiful lighting.

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thanks, i try to make them look cool and realistic (not really) but make them look cool and a eye opener

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Just one thing about uor lighting. Light sources. Where are your lights coming from?

Otherwise, looks nice.

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I counted the light sources as entities.
Quote: "Just one thing about uor lighting. Light sources. Where are your lights coming from?"


OFF TOPIC: Stoopid, I never got your segment pack. for entering the seg comp.

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Quote: "I never got your segment pack. for entering the seg comp."


Ok. Just e-mail me if you have the time, (you can type random stuff if you want) so I can send it to you via that e-mail address.

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General powell11
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yea, i need to make some light sorces , ill probly try modeling its gunna take some work, but w/e, any tips on modeling?

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im working, some more on the main base (lvl 1) and most of levels will be in the main base, only there will be some accidents if you know what i mean, and enemys

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Quote: "against the dangers of a scinetist gone wrong.
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this implies there shall be only one enemy here......

other than that, lighting is great, probably the best i've seen in quite a while.

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well than that scientist will take other people into his power and make zombies

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another new creen, i just was working on a room, it kinda looks like gone by inspire

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oops, let me try again

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That looks really good GP11, keep it up.

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