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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Black Rose

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Wilsypie
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'Black Rose' is my latest game, and really, my first propper attempt at one though I've had FPSC for quite a while now.

The Story
It's the year 2041. The world is in ruin and is being dictated by a twisted, selfish man named Otto Rose. He exploits the citizens of his empire and uses them to gain ecenomic superiority over the other evil dictators of the world. The concept of a 1st world country no longer exists and in it's place now lies poverty and pain. As expected, a secret rebellion is started, to fight against the power of 'Rose' and to try to restor order all over the world. You play as a man known only as Drake, you are the main weapon for the rebels because of you're supreme abilites in combat and millitary intellegence. Since Rose came into power, he has banned all weapons and explosives so this makes the whole fight harder.

These are some screenshots of level 1, in which your goal is to intercept a shipment of weapons to the evil government. It's set in a wharehouse.

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darimc
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nice story, screen could use work though. Better light placement and more entities are a must have to make this game exceptional.

join the x games forum: http://www.fps-x-games.com

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Wilsypie
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Thanx darimc,
it's still very much a WIP
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General powell11
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looks great! keep it up

Check out my WIP game, and comment at>>>> http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=118704&b=25
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Defy
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Wilsypie - I just read your story and WOW.

Quote: "Since Rose came into power, he has banned all weapons and explosives so this makes the whole fight harder.

These are some screenshots of level 1, in which your goal is to intercept a shipment of weapons to the evil government. It's set in a wharehouse"


That right there is classic, nice work! if you keep running with ideas like that, this will be great.
Cool screens also, keep up the good work.


Working on a new title now in progress.
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KeithC
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One of the better WIPs I've seen so far; I'll have to check back on this one again.

-Keith



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first things first great Title and plot but I'm afraid and I mean this in the nicest way that your screenshot look a little bland I know it's meant to be a warehouse but how about some rose banners or propaganda posters

the world is complicated only people are simple
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Look fine !


Just click to show the ShowCase
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Wilsypie
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Thanx everybody,

@ small fish, Good suggestion with the Posters, I'll take that onboard

Some more pics of LvL 1

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the hud is kinda big and it seems it would get in the way. just my opinion tho

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Quote: "the hud is kinda big and it seems it would get in the way. just my opinion tho"


I was thinking the same. I'd change the crosshair to something smaller. But like chees hed said, Just my opinion.

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Would anyone here be interested in some voice acting?
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i wish but i need a mic

Check out my WIP game, and comment at>>>> http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=118704&b=25
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Wilsypie,

Hey, very nice looking W.I.P., indeed! I look forward to seeing the progress on this one, for sure.

I might be able to help you with some voice acting. Drop me a line with a script, and instructions regarding what you're looking for.

Keep up the great work.

Thanks,

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Thanks Seth Black, I e-mailed you.

Is there anyone else interested in voice acting?

help would be appriciated
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Well, what are we acting for?

Like characters? Describe characteristics.

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i could if you want an oddly manly teen voice

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I need the voice for the main character, name: Drake (American Adult)

A female voice, name: Joan (Adult, any accent)

Another male voice Name: Max (any accent)

Thanks
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Ok. I could do some voice acting. Just send me a script.

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Samsung logo, just to let u know, that is not allowed in commercial games...
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Wilsypie - Yeah I would be happy to offer if you get stuck.
I was about to say 'if you dont mind a aus accent' but you know allready what that sounds like. haha. Keep up the great work.


Working on a new title now in progress.
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@ Stoopid - Sure, I'll send you a line or two.

@ deca - I'll send you some as well, thanks

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No problem, I'll get back to you over the next following days.


Working on a new title now in progress.
http://blazorx1.blackfade.com/erablaze.html - demo download
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Wilsypie,

Quote: "Thanks Seth Black, I e-mailed you."


Yep. I just discovered it in my spam folder. I'll get something back to in a day or so.

Thanks,

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Thanks Seth
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That is some good usage of stock media!!!

You just wasted a few seconds of your life reading this signature!
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Quote: "Would anyone here be interested in some voice acting? "

I could do some voice acting please add me by following email lpdechow@hotmail.com

-If it is cool then it is cool
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for the aiming cursor you could do like in re4 and have a red lazer sight. in fact, that's what im trying to do. but heck i find something else you can use this idea.

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hey,
I'll do some voice acting, got a good mic and all, we'll see what comes out of it.

Drop me a line or two.

-AaronG

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Ok. I'll email you.
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Hello Wilsypie, sorry for my delay, had my kids around alot, found it hard to get time for a good recording. Shall have them sent to you tomorrow. Hope the game is going well !

Working on a new title, planning in progress.
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