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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / (X10) Melevolent- WIP

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chees hed
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Posted: 6th Jan 2008 16:37 Edited at: 6th Jan 2008 18:55
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hey guys, i finally got fpsc x10 and started on a new game. remember this is a WIP and if you think it sucks, thats ok thats why i have it here. please comment on the screens.

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Setting: 2598, Abandened Tunnel Nexus/catocomes, Israel

Story: The time has come. All saved souls have been sumoned to heaven and all the unsaved cursed to Hell. In time every knee will bow to He that is King. For now the battle of Armengedden is upon us. All the saved and all the damned shall come forth into battle, the final confrontation between the Holy Messiah and Lusifer the Devil. The two armies shall meet in the Valley of Death to fight, the blood so high the horses must lift their heads to keep from drowning, and all the demons swim to stay afloat. The time has come, in the name of the Descendant of David, WE FIGHT! The moment all 6000+ years has been leading up to.

The role you play:
Recently, a team was sent into abbandoned catacomes under Israel. You and your Squad were left to cover their tracks and eliminate any enemies following them that way they could investigate and see if there was anything usefull. Unfortunately, you and your squad couldnt hold them back, so you run into the tunnel following the previous team and order a military strike on the surface to close off your position. You look back, and your team apparently didnt get to the tunnels before they were closed off, so you are alone. Without any way to receive communications you are in it alone. What you have to do now is find the team that went in before and figure a plan from there. Name: Cpt. Brock; Proffesion: US Military 3rd division; Age: 46;


sorry; i guess these are not all very good pics, but im getting some more as fast as i can. this 1st one isnt as bland as it looks, ill get some more up soon

what doesn't kill me makes me stronger; but if something kills me, I'm not that strong am I?

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another image

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and another
EDIT: oh, sorry, forgot to post, here it is.
EDIT 2: never mind i guess i already put all the images

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and the last

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why is there water?

in the immortal words of cheeshead you are a forum ruiner guy!
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Posted: 6th Jan 2008 18:58
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Where's the screen?

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Posted: 6th Jan 2008 19:23
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the water is actually supposed to be blood. ( read the story, unless its not there, they're checking my posts AGAIN1)

hold on ill get everything straightened out as soon as i can

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Posted: 6th Jan 2008 20:19
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I don't see it either. Give it a few days and the post will show up. this happens to me allot too when viewing others post.

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Posted: 6th Jan 2008 22:59 Edited at: 8th Jan 2008 00:38
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alright i think i got everything straightened out, so what do yall think? ( story,in-game,etc. ) any of yall really experienced proffesional guys i would really appreciate your comments

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Posted: 8th Jan 2008 00:39 Edited at: 8th Jan 2008 22:29
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all right new screen. come on somebody has to have an interest in this game. comeon where is everybody?!

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*bump* this is getting sooo annoying, why doesnt anybody came to this thread?

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Posted: 9th Jan 2008 14:03
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Since no one seems to have time or interest to write here so I do it.

Your screens are pretty... uninteresting. Try adding some entities and since you have X10, some cool effects like bloom.

http://koti.mbnet.fi/teora/intersoft/
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Quote: "*bump* this is getting sooo annoying, why doesnt anybody came to this thread?"


I have, 'cos i thought up the name........lol.......

yawn, i'm bored,at school....

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Ok, firstly, i don't think it looks like blood, more like mud but that's ok. You're in old tunnels so i think it's more interesting to be walking through sewage.

I don't understand why you have random pictures of cats and stuff :S And yes, the rooms are uninteresting. Add more entities and things
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Posted: 9th Jan 2008 21:04 Edited at: 9th Jan 2008 21:04
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Not to be too negative, but as an X10 game, it looks bad. If it were an FPSC game, it would be considered "okay." Your screens make the game look boring. Try pushing all of X10's features to the limits. Add more lights and entities, and don't put the water in the game unless it is necessary to the gameplay.

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Posted: 9th Jan 2008 21:07 Edited at: 9th Jan 2008 22:29
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Quote: "why doesnt anybody came to this thread?"

well when we first did there was nothing here, not any of your post, in fact bobert's was the first post some of us can see,
Quote: "Where's the screen?"
. Not your fault , it's a forum glitch.I'm JUST able to see them now. As I said before this happens from time to time.

Now that I see them.
Quote: "Your screens are pretty... uninteresting Try adding some entities "

I have to agree. I though we were all done with undecorated halways and rooms. Dont go too bloom happy as it sometimes makes it look crap, save bloom for what its needed on.

Quote: "I don't understand why you have random pictures of cats and stuff "

Yeah that just not showing a serious effort. We can't really take your game seriously when stuff like that is in it.

ALso its a bit dark thats why the blood looks like mud; some of the screens are to dark o see.

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Posted: 9th Jan 2008 22:26
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Is this the game you're constantly boasting about going commercial?

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Inspire: probably in the long run. i know its not the best, but i didnt expect it to be right off the bat.

D13: hmm, the screens dont look that dark to me, in fact, they arent very dark at all, to me. i guess it depends on your monitor.

Butt Monkey: deleted the cat.

To everyone: i have been working on this, added more entities, also fixed up the blood, to make it look more like blood. I also appologize, i am just so used to fpsc x9 im still geting used to x10. More lights and entities have been put in, and i am still working. ill get a screen as soon as i can.

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i dont like this... the screenies are bland and unexciting. You can improve it by adding good lighting and really think out the story man, dont start a game tell u have everything planned out.
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plz add x10 effects. this looks like x9.

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Posted: 24th Jan 2008 00:48
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nice story line, but I have to go with the other guys on this one. put in more stuff.

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