You definitely need to put more effort into the art. I didn't get the joke because I hadn't heard the news story, and, well, if what everyone is saying is true, you misinterpreted the story... badly, therefore making the joke even less funny. Now. Back to the art. Is it really so much effort to draw more than one cloud? All you did was copy any paste... Maybe this is nitpicking but it just seems like the plane is on a backdrop of tiling wallpaper.
And the perspective on the wings VS the tail...fins? I don't know what they are called... is like completely wrong. I mean.. it's fine if they are wrong, it's a comic, it looks funny, but they should both be wrong the same way.
Better luck next time :\ Sorry. I know how hard it is to make up decent comics. I try in my spare time as well. You have the ambition, you just need more practice. I mean... you keep coming back for more flames and criticism so that says something about your drive. Good luck