I have taken a much better examination of my pre game script and it sucked. Here is a much better and detailed version in the code snippet box. Please give feedback if it sounds like a good starting point for a hack n slash game. All the best,
Beastegargoyle
Story Background
Joshua( a great swordsmen judge) dies and the rise of monarchy in Israel begins. During this tumultuous time several leaders, judges, are raised up to govern the people. Some of these men and women are heroic in their efforts while others rule over a people straying far from God.
Game Events
The game begins with the swordsmen judges being called to war. The four swordsmen gather their strength to fight against the Perizzite‘s army and Canannite army. They head to Bezek( a war torn desert battlefield) and fight against ten thousand Perizzite and Canannite troops. While in the mist of fighting we kill the bad king’s( he is the whole point of game and end boss) son named Oreb. Adonibezek the Perizzite’s captain flees from the battle; to try and save himself from our encroaching forces coming and taking over his army and coming after him. We locate Adonibezek miles away hiding in an abandoned stable( an old farm house) and clashed with him and cut off his hands and toes and stab him so that he dies a painful death. Where after the bad king’s son dies and he kills some Israelite’s( our tribes people).
We travel to Jerusalem and smite it with the edge of the sword( siege the city), and set the city on fire. A bad warrior( enemy from another army) gets wounded and burned in the fires in the city; although he manages to survive with only severe wounds and burns. Afterward we head to the armies that dwell in the mountains, and in the south, and in the valley. We engage in war and defeat the Hebronites that lie in the mountainous area‘s, but we can not drive out the inhabitants of the valley, because they have chariots of iron and bring our attacking efforts to a halt when they use strong iron and steel weapons and vehicles.
Our Israelite people(the swordsmen’s tribe) did evil and lowered their guard( determined mindset to live rightly) and got themselves captured. Eglon the king of Moab captured our people and made them slaves. His army and the Ammorite’s army made the Israelites work their land( plant crops, tend to the land, make clay stones; for free) of palm trees( a very vegetative/ well irrigated land) for 8 years. We come to Eglon( Moab’s king; in his palace) to talk with him and tell him were visitors passing by and ask to have lodge for the night. Eglon agrees to letting us stay the night. We take leave to our chamber and make a small dagger. We go unto Eglon secretly in the night; we find Eglon resting during the night, and stick him with the dagger in his stomach because he was a very fat man. When we stuck his belly with the dagger; it closed up over and around the dagger; so that he could not pull it out and dirt( blood) came out of his stomach. After that we fled from the palace and freed our people( the Israelites) and slew the rest of the Moab army.
Later on we travel to the Ammorites secret outpost where they held all of our people’s animals( cattle). We slaughtered many of the Ammorites that were up and about( on duty) and took our animals back to our people. We also find a very valuable relic( treasure) of our people’s while searching through the alcoves of the enemies army outpost. As our people begin settling back in our country a certain monster( big teethe monster that I already have) inhabited a portion of our country now and we travel to defeat him. So we journey to the edge of our country and find this formidable and terrible monster and put him to death so that he could never harm anyone ever again.
Yet, another bad captain named Sisera oppressed our people after losing their guard once again. So we set out to destroy his army of nine hundred chariots of iron. We( the swordsmen) set up our tents and equipment on top of the mount Tabor. Sisera came with his entire army and camped below the mountain we were on. It rained the next morning and washed away some of their stuff( like equipment) and gave us an advantage; as we rushed down the mountain to attach them. We came down the mountain with all of our army and destroyed his army and chariots so much; that Sisera fled by foot. Sisera traveled to our half cousin( a girl half cousin). She did not like Sisera or his army at all. Sisera came to her house for a place to lay down and relax and she offered him lodge. She gave him food and drink; then put him to rest. While he was fast asleep Jael( our half cousin) took a tent nail and a hammer. Than she went to him while he was sleeping and smote the nail into his temple( his head). Sisera died right away, after impact. We meet her later on after looking for him for a day or two and found him dead with a spike through his head.
We had a few year’s peace( rest and no slavery) until a dragon entered our country and was destroying our crops. So we journeyed to find him and murder him. We found his sleeping den in a wintry cavern above some rocks in the side of a mountain/pillar thingy.
Character Background Info
The judges were tribesmen in Israel upon whom the Lord laid the burden of Israel’s apostate and oppressed state. They were the spiritual ancestors of the prophets; that is to say, men raised up by God, to represent Him in the nation. They were patriots and religious reformers because national security and prosperity were inseparably connected with loyalty and obedience to God. Titus Is a Israelite swordsmen judge( he is the man with hair and a satchel across his chest). He was but the son of a younger brother of Caleb. Barak Is a Israelite swordsmen judge( he is the bald headed guy with a giant axe). He was a left handed man and an assassin. Zena Is a woman swordsmen judge( she is the girl swordsmen).
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